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Suffering mild writer's block and disintrest.

I don't say this too often, but I like this piece.

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.
Scotland is based on a pixiv design that belongs to Repoko.

Any similarities to characters, settings, scripts, or stories from other pieces of literature or media are purely coincidental.

This story belongs to me, *GydroZMaa.

I have now updated a continuation for this story: [link]
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:iconhinata-wolf77:
Hinata-Wolf77 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014   General Artist
Beautiful.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :thanks:
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wxzhenghoppytruffles Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome story!
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:iconbunnyfitzgerald:
BunnyFitzgerald Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
Lovely story, I'm so happy you are going to continue it. :D
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :aww:
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:iconvoclaoid-magnet:
VOCLAOID-Magnet Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is very beautiful. ^^ I really love your stories.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much~ :iconembarrasedplz:
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VOCLAOID-Magnet Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are welcome, love. :33
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:iconyamiyuki1:
yamiyuki1 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww~! this is so perfect~! XD
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why, thank you~
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yamiyuki1 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe someday that girl will get the courage to sing about freedom~ ^_^ It's so awesome~
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconcryforeverplz: :iconamericawhyplz:
Scottie left me!!!!


Beautiful story but it made me CRY!!!! (I know I'm a crybaby! I cant help it)
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the compliment. :thanks:
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome!!!!!
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GoldenPhoenix123 Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Student Writer
This story is my very favorite of all stories I ever read. I rarely see pieces this good. I do hope you get over your writer's block and write a continuation to this. Keep on writing
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you very much for the compliment~ :iconcblushplz:

I think I've gotten over my writer's block since it's been a little over a month since I've written this story. I just need some time to get things together before I continue writing again. :aww:
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heartcandy101 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
No , he realized. She’s not singing for freedom—not yet.

She’s singing for
me.

dude that's literary genius
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, that's not literary genius. That's the work of writer's block. ^^;
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riolightwarrior Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
all your stories thus far i love
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why, thank you~ :aww:
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riolightwarrior Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
mhmm ^^
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Crystall-92 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww.. Such a beautiful story! I love it. :love: This two last lines are so wonderfull!

I agree with Neytiri-nature-lover! I really, really want to read the sequel!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why, thank you~

If you did want me to continue this, then you'd have to be very patient. Plus, you'd have to be an open-minded and mature reader.
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Crystall-92 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I am patient and deffinitely mature reader. (Even if I know how it sounds ;) )
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lissyloveisawesome Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
May I please have more? This is SO AMAZING!




me pasta :3
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Me pasta" isn't a grammatically correct term anywhere, but thanks.
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Neytiri-nature-lover Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
:) It's beautiful. It would be amazing if there was a sequel.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why, thank you~ If I did continue this, you'd have to be prepared for some mature themes. :blushes:
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Neytiri-nature-lover Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013
Okie dokie, I can totally do that. *hero pose* I am prepared for everything! xD
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dragoeniex Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Very nice story. It has a great, fairy tale feel to it. Arthur had a quick mood change in the middle, but as a whole... the story feels so sincere. I love it. :) It's also nice to have a female character who isn't physically beautiful or really ugly, but is just kind of average-looking.

Will you continue this? It feels a little unfinished. If he doesn't go back or wait on her, she will be alone when she finally sings to free herself. If that happens, he'll have broken his promises and (if I understand right) she'll be in danger of becoming tainted and dying. (Plus I'd just like to hear more about these two characters. :P )
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*Laughs* Based on the backstory to this one-shot, England's little fit was quite justified.

I have the ability to continue this story, but the plot will have some mature elements that some of my readers may find different than what they're used to reading.
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Very cool.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
You're welcome.
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Muzukashiko Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Student
I love the feeling of it being a tale! Very nice~
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~
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CrazyCharlette1415 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Bittersweet, but I like it.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :thanks:
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XlKittiezlX Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Another of your great masterpieces :D
The bittersweet ending almost made me cry
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the lovely compliment. :thanks:
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Happybagels123 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
That was amazing!! :iconshining-eyesplz: The ending was bittersweet, but it really worked!! I loved it!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why, thank you~
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hetaliarocksmysoxoff Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
:iconmegustamuchoplz: I really loved this! Yet another wonderful piece!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Daww, thank you~ :iconembarrasedplz:
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agatstone Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Yet again another masterpiece.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Another?" Oh my, thank you. :blushes:
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Pepsi-bunny Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
AGAIN ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF ART!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you~
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Pepsi-bunny Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Your welcome.
I've only read two of your pieces,but they're still really magnificent.I love your literature!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Daww, I still appreciate it~
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