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This is a hasty request for :iconcrushgoddess:
Just so you all know, I didn't come up with the name myself; she wanted me to name the jealous antagonist, "Kaitlynn."

In the comic, Prussia tells India that he is a natural at everything he does, and with his meticulous diaries, I'd guess he's pretty smart. Not really sure about Denmark, but he's got Finland to help him.

I found out that with the way this plot was going, there was no way to fit in into one chapter so this is actually going to be two parts. So much for only taking one-shot requests.

I do not own any characters of Axis Powers: Hetalia. They belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.

Any similarities to characters, settings, scripts, or stories from other pieces of literature or media are purely coincidental.

ŠThis story belongs to me, ~GydroZMaa.

Part 2: [link]
Final: [link]
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:iconkoolkatkaty:
koolkatkaty Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Student
Really my first name is Kaitlin
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry. The person who requested this wanted me to call her Kaitlynn. ^^;
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AllenJ8038850 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
(Ha... At least I have an OC who us EXACTLY like me~!)
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AllenJ8038850 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
(My names Kaitlyn... I'm not a bitch I'm an outsider....! AND IM FUCKING PROUD! XD)
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's not my fault. That's what the requester wanted. 
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AllenJ8038850 Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I understand bro! XD
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:icongodblessusa1234567:
GodblessUSA1234567 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013
Now if someone had slap me in the face you know what I'm fist is going to meet their stomach
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The reader was smart enough to think she was above that.
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:icongodblessusa1234567:
GodblessUSA1234567 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
Yeah she was go blue ( she my oc ) good it wasn't her 2p
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Uh. Okay.
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:icongodblessusa1234567:
GodblessUSA1234567 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
:3
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CrownedFact Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
FSDSFDFSF''ASDDSDAFNJ fiamklefijk iuahkjfshma I WUV U 4 MAKEING THIS!!!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my. Thank you. :blushes:
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:iconhedgehogs11:
hedgehogs11 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
rjngalrjdfbgdgjnfduofljbngjl;bna;djlgnblakgjbnalejnblagjkdbnaaaagjknadglkjbngjbngjbnjgdnbgjnbjgnbgjnbgjnbgjnhs;jonbjngg;jbngjbngjbn;gjnb;gjbn;gnj;gjbng;jnb;gjbn thats right, uniformed pattern even when having a fangasm. also I will eliminate this Katie girl and send her soul to hell where it will be demolished, the deadly sin of lust will have no mercy on her soul MUAHAHHAHA I am sorry, I Englanded out there for a second.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Uh...okay. 
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xxxWARGIRLxxx Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD I think I woulda had to kill Katie though....:iconfrageplz:
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:iconslowniczek:
slowniczek Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
wow... this probably the best fanfiction i've ever read... and i've read hundrets of them... O.O
amazing~
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
R-Really? I feel so honored! Thank you!
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:iconslowniczek:
slowniczek Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
haha no i thank you for writing this! <3 x3
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monkeylvr13 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012
i read all 3. i normally h8 alfred cuz he is annoying but he is kinda sweet and kind in these stories!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The character's as good as the writer makes him/her to be. I'm glad I was able to make him tolerable for you.

Thank you for reading!
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monkeylvr13 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
ur welcome and thxs for that.
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
it's cute. Really cute. And, Reader, is just like me.
although, it started from the beginning of school, not just high school. although, I'm not valedictorian, because high school gave me friends. But, hey, I can totally connect with reader and man, I would hit Alfred so hard. Seriously. How stupid can he be? Honestly, guys are really stupid sometimes.
(no offense, people)
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, just you wait reader.
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mewXxtaytay Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL, the awesome thing about these fan-fics is, i created my own OC, so i can picture this PERFECTLY in my head. its like my own personal movie. about me and an awesome guy!! :squee:!! i really love this so far!!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I'm glad the insert's working out for you!
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The-Awesome-Jade Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Student General Artist
O///O

Alfred? WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?
Why are you so mean Alfred?

Nice cliffhanger by the way. Very nice~
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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:iconthe-awesome-jade:
The-Awesome-Jade Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome~
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Yuuki226 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's funny cause at my school, they rig the grades to where the actual smart kids are like 4th and 5th and such while the Jocks are valedictorian and salutatorian -__- it's quite annoying.

Loved this story, I seriously cannot wait for part 2~
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ouch, that's messed up. The top students at my school actually work for their ranks, though sometimes I wonder how they can be so smart and have lives.

All that aside, thank you for your comment! I'm working on part 2 right now!
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Yuuki226 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know! I hate living in a school run by athletics *grumbles*

Yay!! I can't wait to read it~ That was a horribly mean cliffhanger by the way xD
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*Raises hands up in defense* I didn't mean for it to happen like that! I usually stop when I feel it gets too long so I'm so sorry!
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Yuuki226 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's cool xD It was a pretty good cliffhanger. Evil, but good xD
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ellarycelery123 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nerd that gets made fun of alot. Heh. story of my life. I really liked the story, awesome job. I look forward to part 2.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No one made fun of the "nerds" at my high school. Each of my school's valedictorians was super popular and a favorite among both students and teachers. They left everyone who wasn't in the top 10 in the dust...

Thank you! And if I can finish up a different request, I'll start working on part 2.
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ellarycelery123 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awesome! can't wait.
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StellaMarris Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heh. There's this little 8 year old at the church where my mom goes and she's made me her role model. Her name's Kaitlynn. Spelled exactly the same, so I find this slightly humorous.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh no! But in all seriousness, I didn't pick out the name if you read the description.

Oh man. That is pretty funny how that works out.
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StellaMarris Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I read the description. So, it just makes me wonder... did the person who requested the story know my Kaitlynn? Or is it just a coincidence? Guess I'll never know. I mean, who'd have a quarrel with an 8 year old wannabe game warden?
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No, the person who requested actually based this in-story character on someone else with a different spelling of "Kaitlynn" that she knows in real life, it seems. So, no, it's not your Kaitlynn.
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StellaMarris Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, ok, that's a relief. I'd have to have a chat with my Kaitlynn. Something along the lines of:
"What have you been doing at school little missy?"
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USXUKforever Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Great story can't wait for more, but it's kinda weird since the that tourters me is named Kaitlynn.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's because the one who requested this story wanted me to name her that.

Anyway, thank you for the comment!
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USXUKforever Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome :) besides it's not like it bothers me
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CrushGoddess Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Student Writer
*rubs hands* Caitlin WOILD slap me... And I ABSOULUTELY LOVE THIS FIC! THANK U SO MUCH! if I could fav this story a million times, I would. ( and Caitlin is a real person n a bitch. ) ur are my official favorite author now
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah. I was wondering why you had me pick that name...Pheh.

And you're welcome! Thank you for requesting it!

Eee! That means so much to be called someone's favorite author! Thank you so much!~
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CrushGoddess Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Student Writer
Ur welcome! U r awesome! I love people who write without any typos or grammar mistakes! I love u!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not sure why people don't take the time to do so, but thank you again!
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xXDiaryXCosplayXx Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
great fanfic and HOW DARE THAT BITCH SLAP ME!! if i was reader san then i would have tackled that whore down.
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