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Feliciano was coming home from another long day of training. Ludwig could work him hard, but he knew it was only to make him a stronger person. As he was walking towards his house underneath the streetlight-lit commuter along the sidewalks, he heard a sharp rustling noise followed by a loud clang! Startled, Feliciano jumped back and screamed in fear.

"Please-a don't hurt me!" he begged out into the empty street only made visible by the stale lighting of the electric glow of the streetlights overhead. "You can-a take my pasta, or my flags, or my money (but I don't-a have any on me at the moment), but please don't-a hurt my fragility!"

Feliciano's pleas were in vain because after listening to nothing but the silence and the soft hum of people chatting in their living quarters, he came to the conclusion that there was no one there.

"Ahh, it must have-a just been-a the wind," the nervous wreck of an Italian sighed in relief.

As he proceeded to continue, he heard another loud rustling.

"Ve! Don't hurt me!" Feliciano screamed out again. This time, he was certain someone—or something—was out to get him. Not wanting to face whatever was making the undetectable noises, he clamped his hands to his ears and began to run blindly down the sidewalk—only to trip a few seconds later on some laid-out garbage bags.

"Ve—!" Feliciano cried and fell face-first onto the concrete. Luckily nothing got bruised so he was able to pick himself up again and survey his surroundings. Then, the rustling noise grew extremely loud. Whatever was making the noise was right among the trash bags.

Letting out a gasp, Feliciano fell back to the ground in surprise, and his eyes feel upon one of the most peculiar things he had ever seen.

"Nyan?"

"Ve?" Feliciano responded.

The girl…cat…thing…had her large (e/c) eyes completely focused on Feliciano. Her long tail waved back and forth curiously, and in her mouth was something that looked like scraps of a neighbor's leftovers.

"Ve, what's una bella ragazza doing here at-a such a late hour?" Feliciano asked and lifted a ripped piece of black plastic off the cat-girl's head. The cat-girl responded by shaking her…ears…and scratching her head.

"Ragazza, do you-a have a place to go?" he asked quietly. The cat-girl only stared.

What if she can't speak? Feliciano wondered.

That question was answered when the cat-girl opened her mouth and began to…

"Gyyaaooo," she yawned.

"Ve…What am I supposed to do?" Feliciano wondered. He had brought in stray cats before, but this looked like a bigger problem than he could handle. It didn't look like the girl had any place to go to, and she must've been hungry if she was searching through people's garbage. He had to do something.

"Ve, ragazza, guess what?" he said. "Why don't-a we go back to my place so we can-a have some pasta?"

The cat-girl responded by leaning towards him and began to sniff him curiously.

"Ve…That tickles," Feliciano chuckled. Suddenly, he felt something hot and stinging run across his cheek. When he placed his hand at the tingling sensation, he found that it was bleeding. The cat-girl had scratched him.

"I'm-a sorry! I didn't mean to do whatever it is that I made you do that-a for!" he shouted and pleaded for the cat-girl to show him mercy. Then, he heard the sound of something rumbling and thought it was the cat-girl growling, but it was actually her stomach.

The cat-girl frowned and clutched her stomach close to her chest.

"Ve, you're hungry, aren't you?" Feliciano said sadly. He wanted to help, but he was afraid he would get scratched again. Then, he had an idea.

"I know! Maybe Heracles knows-a something about you! Wait-a right here, ragazza! I'll be-a back before you can say 'pasta!'"

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"…"

"Ve…?"

"Nyan?"

"Uh…Heracles…What do you-a think?" Feliciano asked nervously wondering if it was a good idea to call the Greek all the way out in his neighborhood.

Heracles continued to stare hard at the cat-girl with a serious look trying to look for a proper answer—at least, that's what Feliciano hoped he was doing.

Finally, Heracles spoke. "It's a sort of neko," he said.

"Ve? Neko?" Feliciano echoed curiously.

Heracles nodded. "I heard about these things from Kiku. They are very popular in Asian media and pop culture."

"So what-a does that mean?"

Heracles turned to Feliciano and gave him a stern look.

"I want to keep her," he said with a mellow voice that nearly contradicted his serious statement.

"You can't-a do that!" Feliciano cried and waved his arms around. "She looks-a like a human, too!"

"She looks like a cat," Heracles insisted. "I like cats."

"Ve, but-a she's not completely a cat!" Feliciano pointed out.

"This isn't going to work," Heracles decided. "I know: why don't we let her decide?"

"That sounds like a plan!" Feliciano said. It would have been fun having a ca—neko-girl in his care.

--Reader's POV--

The two men were offering you lots of food. They all tasted good. You weren't hungry anymore.

"So how do you-a like it?" the one with the funny curl asked. It looked bouncy. You wanted to play with it. So you did.

"Ve, stop-a that!" the curly-haired one shrieked. He sounded funny when he shrieked.

"Perhaps you would like to play with this instead?" the one with the flat mushroom hat said and dangled a toy mouse in front of you. It looked cute. You liked cute things. So you began to play with it instead of the curly hair that made the other guy make too many noises when you pulled it.

"That's a good kitty," Mushroom Hat said and pet you behind your ears. You let out a satisfied purr.

"Ve…" Curly Hair sighed.

Suddenly, you smelled something strange on Mushroom Hat's hand. Was that…? It was! Other cats! How dare this man touch you! If he had other cats, how could he pay attention to only you?!

In your anger, you scratched Mushroom Hat on his hand and hissed for him to get away.

"Well, that has never happened before," Mushroom Hat said taken aback and examined his hand. "…Ouch."

Whatever. The other one's food tasted better. And he didn't smell like other cats. You crept over to him and nuzzled his chest. It was warm. You liked warm things.

"Ve? You chose-a me over Heracles?" Curly Hair smiled and ticked you behind your ears. You began to purr again. "Uh, Heracles, are you alright with-a me keeping her?"

"I don't think she likes me," Mushroom Hat said softly still looking at his hand that had swollen scars forming. "I should get going now, Feli. It's late."

"Ve, buona notte," Curly Hair said and waved. Before Mushroom Hat left, he turned around and looked at you.

"Are you going to give her a name?" he asked.

"Ve, I think I'll name her, ____________," Curly Hair said. You smiled. It sounded like a nice name. "She likes it, too!"

"That's good," Heracles smiled and said goodnight to the both of you. "Oh. One more thing: Kiku told me neko-girls like to play with things that dangle or stick out—like your curl. I recommend you watch out."

"G-Grazie…" Curly Hair said nervously.

Who cared about Mushroom Hat's warning? The curly strand of hair looked like so much fun to play with! So you began to play with it. Curly Hair was beginning to look uncomfortable. Maybe he was hungry.

"Ve, stop it, ____________..." Curly Hair whined. "Didn't you-a hear Heracles?"

You didn't stop. He couldn't stop himself because of that.
Yet another strange request. I'm debating whether or not the reader is a furrie. Something tells me she's not. I'm not even sure this falls under romance. Ah, well.

This is a request made out to :iconneko-neko-nyan:.

By the way, if you read carefully, you'll notice that the style of writing changes when getting to the reader's POV.

I do not own any characters of Axis Powers: Hetalia. They belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.

Any similarities to characters, settings, scripts, or stories from other pieces of literature or media are purely coincidental.

ŠThis story belongs to me, ~GydroZMaa.

EDIT: Okay, I know some people want this to continue, but in all seriousness, I technically don't owe anyone anything--I'm doing these requests for free for crying out loud (but that's going to change when I go back to school)! Even if I wanted to continue this, I have many other things that I need to get to before summer vacation ends ([link]) so please, stop asking me to continue this and look at the comments below. If I do choose to continue this, I will not get to this for a very very long time. Please understand that I'm doing enough for everyone already--more than most people would bother to--so you all have to be really patient. I'm sorry if I'm coming off as frustrated, but I really can't take another workload right now.
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:iconwolfisinmysoul:
Wolfisinmysoul Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
Adorable
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :)
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The-OtakuHime Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014
Things that dangle or stick out O/////O
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Cleo-Smythe Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
Omg so kawaiiHappy Clap 
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~
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babymama90 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
This is really cute~!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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:iconbabymama90:
babymama90 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
You're welcome~!
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:iconsuperanimeallykitty:
SuperAnimeAllyKitty Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Could someone else continue this story, Nyan?~
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd rather people not rip off or continue my stories. 
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SuperAnimeAllyKitty Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Just a thought, I was not meaning to be mean, or ignorant. I was also not insinuating that I, or others would be encouraged to do so. I just asked.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Still, the answer is no.
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Pandachu123 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
D'aww. Cute! XD
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:iconrena4eva:
rena4eva Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I like the storie
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"Story." And thank you. 
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:iconrena4eva:
rena4eva Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
No problem i really loved it tho and do you still do requests?
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry, too many people have discouraged me. I'm never doing requests ever again. 
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:iconrena4eva:
rena4eva Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Ok thanks for telling me :D have a nice day
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Np problem. 
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:iconrena4eva:
rena4eva Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Oh i forgot to ask do you have any upcoming stories? Sorry if I'm being pest i just love to read more of your stories!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You can just check my gallery. It's full of stories. 
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FrostyChica Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
and he couldnt help himself because of that.


ohonhonhonhon
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loveteddylove1 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Professional General Artist
Ohnohnohnohn I feel a lemon coming up
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nope.
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alaskajones Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
- you didn't stop. He couldent stop him self becase of that -
*near nose bleed*-fan girl squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee-
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nicole142518 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
Great job on this.… but I'm girl not a thing
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. 

Well, it was just part of the request. I just went along with the prompt. :shrug:
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:iconnicole142518:
nicole142518 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
You welcome your a great writer
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DreamingHetalia101 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That last line :iconiseeplz:
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:iconpokemon7777:
pokemon7777 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
im not just a thing i am a GIRL
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larriss Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Part 2 please
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haven't you read the description?
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:iconlarriss:
larriss Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh sorry
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iluvhetalia1 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
OMG so adorable X3!!!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, thank you~
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JessieRose101 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so cute so cute~! :iconiloveyouplz:
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Why, thank you~
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JessieRose101 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your welcome~! :iconchuuplz:
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Amber-Emerald Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student Artist
If you make a part 2 ill watch you.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Eh, it doesn't matter to me whether or not you watch me. I wouldn't mind continuing this, but I'm too busy to do it right now. I mean, I'll probably do it in the future, but I have my own personal projects I need to work on first.
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Amber-Emerald Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student Artist
Ok but ill watch you anyway. Your stories are awesome! ^-^
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh! Thank you so much~! I really appreciate it!
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Amber-Emerald Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student Artist
Your welcome! Just keep those awesome stories coming! :)
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Emerald-Rogue Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so cute! I really like it~ ^_^
You're a really great writer. ;D
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*Blushes* Thank you~
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Emerald-Rogue Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
D'aww~ You're welcome! :huggle:
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Kinky-Kirara Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i understand your frustration -w- it can be a little annoying with all those 'is there going to be more?' comments.but i respect that.if you want to continue it i (and alot of other people) would love that,but if your not okay ^^ we'll get over it,i mean its just a story -w- and a good one at that.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks~ I'm glad you understand.

It's really ironic that I'd say "no" to a continuation when other writers ask, "Oh my gosh, should I continue this?" But then, I'm not really like other writers. I try to bring something different to these reader inserts, and by doing so, a lot of my time gets taken up.

Since people were asking for a continuation, I actually came up with something for a mini series, but I'm already working on two series that people were requesting after I posted one-shots of them so it wouldn't do to have another one on my shoulders.
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Kinky-Kirara Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
-w- i see.well good luck with that ^^
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
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