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A request for :iconemmyaltava1:. There aren't too many Hong Kong lemons out there...

*Groans* I know I said I'd do lemons, but this isn't very good...I probably just end up disappointing people...The plot doesn't make sense, the *beep* is bad, the story drags on, the lines are corny...*Continues to self-criticize*

I do not own any characters of Axis Powers: Hetalia. They belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.

Any similarities to characters, settings, scripts, or stories from other pieces of literature or media are purely coincidental.

©This story belongs to me, GydroZMaa.

3/3/15: You guys, this lemon sucks. Don't favorite it. Seriously. I'm being serious. 
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Reported as spam. Please do not post this kind of stuff on my work. 
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:iconthefiredragonesreshi:
TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Student Filmographer
I hate the dark. So I sleep with the lights on. Yea I know I'm a scaredy cat ;_;
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:iconblazethemage:
blazethemage Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Student General Artist
I wish there were more lemons out there with Hong Kong, and I wish the ones out there were more like this. To me this lemon was well done. Of course I'm not the best writer, so I don't know good writing like others, but I feel like you did very well on this. So don't criticize yourself, others and myself think it was very well done.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah ha ha...Thank you. But regardless of what others say, I know this is a bad story. It's not even a matter of opinion...
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:iconblazethemage:
blazethemage Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Student General Artist
But to me this a lot better than what I write. I wish I was a good writer as you.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh gosh, I hope you don't sell yourself short to a story like this one. I'm sure you can do better than this. 
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:iconblazethemage:
blazethemage Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Student General Artist
I don't. I got better things to do like school and taking care of my brother. But I really admire your work, any story really.
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:iconihavetoomanyocs123:
IhavetoomanyOCs123 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015  Student General Artist
O////O
SENPAI! First you write my favourite oneshots, then I find out you made my favourite comic, then my favourite chapter story, then one of my favourite lemons?! Yay, thank you senpai!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
No...This is a terrible story...You're welcome anyway...?
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:iconihavetoomanyocs123:
IhavetoomanyOCs123 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015  Student General Artist
I like ^////^
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:icontechnolgiccheeto:
TechnolgicCheeto Featured By Owner Edited Jan 16, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The entire night? With lights on? oh how that would annoy the living SHIT outa me
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:iconcqnnibql:
cqnnibql Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Cute plot. I really liked it
^-^ Well done~ 👏
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :blushes:
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:iconbluemoonteardrop134:
Bluemoonteardrop134 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omg! *nosebleeded*
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:iconkittytheotakugirl:
KittyTheOtakuGirl Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I am not an overly huge fan of Hong Kong but I just don't read too many of him... This was awesome saucy though
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Laughs* Thank you, and that's alright. I really don't write lemons anymore, anyway. 
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:iconkittytheotakugirl:
KittyTheOtakuGirl Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I have only written one lemon and it was Finland. I thinking of removing it... I just really REALLY don't like how I did that story... both parts of it was total shit.
and also, you're welcome
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:iconcrystallove13:
crystallove13 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
the tittle should be "my light" LOLZ just sayin' sorry for the super cheezy lines
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't "tittle" my requests. 
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:iconcrystallove13:
crystallove13 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
oh okay.. im just sayin dont be mad >_<
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I'm just saying, too. 
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:iconcrystallove13:
crystallove13 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
LOLZLOLZ
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:iconxxhomura-kiryuxx:
XxHomura-KiryuxX Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014
( HGNNNN HONG IS SO SEXY DA!)
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:iconkagame000:
kagame000 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
the noodle monster???
sounds tasty lol
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:iconkittytheotakugirl:
KittyTheOtakuGirl Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
must have been an Italy productions
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:iconkim77angle:
kim77angle Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
*STARTS TO READ*
ME: WHO THE FUCK IS LEON!!!
*MIDDLE OF THE STORY*
ME: OK...WHY THE NAME LEON?
*ENDING OF STORY*
ME: Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed 
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Who else would Leon be other than Hong Kong, the featured character of this story? 
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:iconkim77angle:
kim77angle Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Student Digital Artist
BUT WHY THE NAME LEON?I am a dummy! 
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Because Himaruya wanted Hong Kong's English name to have to do with dragons. "Long" is the Chinese word for "dragon," and "Leon" is the closest sounding English name to his Chinese names, "Lei Xiao" and "Jia Long." 
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:icondragon-diary:
dragon-diary Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
by most leon is new York and kaoru is hong kong  
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, don't give me that. New York is an OC created by a misinformed fan. "Leon" is one of the recommended English names for Hong Kong because Himaruya wanted Hong Kong's human name to have something to do with dragons. One of the Chinese words for "dragon" is "long" which sounds similar to "Leon."
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:icondragon-diary:
dragon-diary Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
o
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:iconthosedirtytacos:
ThoseDirtyTacos Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
His Electricity Bill must be Unimaginable.....
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:iconchaoticpuffins:
ChaoticPuffins Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's what I thought...
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:icondeannafiske:
deannafiske Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Dont criticize your work it actually wasn't that bad I loved it :)
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Eh heh heh. Thank you. 
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:icondeannafiske:
deannafiske Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Your welcome :)
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:iconcavebat777:
Cavebat777 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Lol every time he said "like" I pictured Poland😂
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:iconihavetoomanyocs123:
IhavetoomanyOCs123 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Me too! (Not that I complain...) I mean what? *cough*
Nah, I prefer mah babei Kaoru to mah babei Feliks.
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:iconkagame000:
kagame000 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
me too
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:iconparasca:
Parasca Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Lol! Me too!
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:iconthathetaliafreak9:
ThatHetaliaFreak9 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Me too!
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:iconhome7654:
Home7654 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
If this is your WORST lemon you are an official ninja, because it is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah ha ha. Thank you. ^^; 
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:iconshirotakaori:
ShiroTakaori Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
("Leon, what were you saying earlier? How did those words go? N-N-go oy…?"

"Ngóh oi néih," Leon answered for you. 

You tested it out. "Nnngóh o-oi néih? Is that how you say it?")

By tht point I was screaming I love you (in Cantonese of course) at my ipad in 4 in the morning and my brother who is next door said.....
Brendan :WHY THE F*CK ARE U SCREAMING 'I LOVE U ' IN FOUR IN THE FRICKIN MORNING?!?!
Jessica: S-T-F-U !!!!WHY THE HELL SHOULD U CARE ?!?! 
Brendan : WELL UR THE ONE YELLING 'I LOVE U' WHILE EVERYONE IS SLEEPING U IDIOT!!!!
Well this continued on until 5 til when everyone was pissed cuz of our arguing and decided to join in our verbal smack down 
(If u didn't know I hate my brother ....he's an @$$ )

Love the lemon by the way , u should rlly stop criticizing ur work....It's AWESOME like this guy ...:iconyayprussiagilbirdplz:

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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It really is a bad lemon by my standards, though. I can do so much better, but I'm glad you like it. ^^;
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:iconawesomeprussia101:
Awesomeprussia101 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
"stay by my side.... youll be my light" THE FEEEEEELS

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:iconshirotakaori:
ShiroTakaori Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hong Kong is afraid of the dark?! :iconepicstareplz:
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:iconbritain7:
Britain7 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
this is fantastic, omg so perf
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