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Thank you for sticking with me until the very end, everyone. :iconarigatouplz: I hope you had as much fun reading this as I did writing this.

On a side, someone pointed out that the song, "Porcelain" sung by Marianas Trench goes very nicely with the ending of the story. I suggest you listen to it once you're done with the story.

The last part of :iconcrazycharlette1415:'s contest prize.

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.

Any similarities to characters, settings, scripts, or stories from other pieces of literature or media are purely coincidental.

This story belongs to me, *GydroZMaa.

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13th-Program Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Too good... So good...
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :thanks:
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lnfluenze Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, I figured some late-night reading could help with my temporary case of insomnia, and it did! I didn't expect to get teary-eyed though. ;w;
The idea of the experiment was certainly interesting. But truthfully, Id rather be dead. ;D;
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, sorry about the teary part. 
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NuclearDisaster Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I didn't came here for you hurt my feel ;w; 

Btw,breathtaking.That's what perfectly describe this story :D
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome~ Thank you for reading!
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rheddkid Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
The feels :iconcryingplz: it's overwelmhing. I can't take it. Your stories always surprise me. I mean when I started reading it I thought reader-chan (or I) was just some type of a scientific experiment that Ludwig created and fell in love with but no! -@ It's a story about Ludwig and Gilbert making a scientific breakthrough that defies the law of life. I really love how this series was created. It's one of my most favorite series now all over da (hell all of your stories are great) Keep creating more stories \o/ Thanks for letting me read such a wonderful story.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome~ Thank you very much for reading~ :thanks:
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eykchung Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Student
Wow.  That was amazing yet so sad...  Though it was really cool how you incorporated the idea of cryonics into your story.  It made for an interesting suspense, sci-fi mash-up of sorts (Am a sci-fi nut :icongermanyfacepalmplz:).  Great job.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Daww, thank you very much. :thanks:
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eykchung Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Student
No problem, I can't wait to read your actual sci-fi fic.
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Aphy-Taffy Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
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NONONONONONOOOOOOOO

GOD DAMN
I'VE READ THREE OF YOUR READER INSERTS SO FAR AND TWO OUT OF THREE HAVE SUCCESSFULLY BROKEN ME
WHY DO I DO THIS TO MYSELF
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh gosh, I'm sorry... :worry:
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xXDubstepzAngelzXx Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm literally crying my eyes out right now. I have literally NEVER cried while reading a book, I'm usually hard as nails but this? This just flipped the swtich. 
This story is so extremely touching and very well done and the ending really really gets to the readers considering the 'attachment' between them, Ludwig and Gilbert in the story.
Very well done, very well done indeed :happycry::clap::heart:  
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, I apologize about the tears, and thank you very much for reading the entire thing. :thanks:
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xXDubstepzAngelzXx Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh no, it's quite alright ^^
And no problem c: 
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watashiwaanime Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This my dear is one of my /favorite/ fanfics. I read it a long time ago and actually remembered the name (I have a terrible memory) so I came back and reread it and it's just as amazing as the first time I read it ;w; and the end made me cry once again XD but still *applauds* this was wonderful.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you very much for taking the time to read this story once again~ I'm glad you still like it. ;v;
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mycornerofrandomness Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This story, my friend, it's like Gilbert would say, AWESOME! It made me cry at the end and honestly everything was so well planned and constructed like at the beginning I thought that you intended for the reader to be a country and somehow was in an accident that made her loose her memories and left her in a very sickly state but then I thought she was some sort of experiment gone wrong that lost  her memories and that Ludwig had fallen in love with while taking care of her because he was a scientist of a scientific facility along with Gilbert and decided to  take reader way because he thought it was inhumane so Ludwig took reader somewhere else and Gilbert was helping them cover because the people they worked for were trying to get reader to go back to some scientific facility, but then you explained what happened and it was so much better and it made me cry because it was so tragic and beautiful at the same time... like Ludwig not wanting to live without her and doing that along with Gilbert to keep her alive and then taking care of her and just refusing to leave her side but then them dying and her waking up all those years later and finding out what happened and what Ludwig wrote for reader to read... it just killed me... like it was so powerful.  
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
E-Eh...Thank you very much. ^^; 
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Misfit-outcasts-o-0 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Student General Artist
i cant stop crying!!
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:iconmarriedtograyfullbus:
I'm soo confused but that cute story tho be killin my feels soo much moe in Luddy.
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SoraLyv Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Student General Artist
I just read this entire story in like a half-hour. I couldn't stop, it's so good! It's so deep and thought out, and SO heart-wrenchingly sweet!!! A million thumbs up and much love for dear Germany and Prussia! 
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, wow, that's fast! Thank you very much for reading the entire thing, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! ;v;
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Jellikat Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
I'm pretty sure you killed me and all my feels... This was a very bittersweet experience
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry about that...
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Jellikat Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
Don't be, it was a great series :D 
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you. ;v;
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Nemurenainda Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Student General Artist
That... was unexpected. OAO

When I started the story, I had thought that perhaps Reader was a country, and something had happened to her to make her lose her memories. But that theory hadn't explained why she had been cooped up and coddled.

When the pills were introduced, my theory changed to Reader being a clone. I thought Gilbird was a clone as well.

When it was finally revealed, it was one of those "mouth slowly gaping open" sort of revelations. "Oh... my... God."

It was a bittersweet story, and it speaks to me about the idea of how Ludwig had tried to protect Reader, but had, in the end, been the ultimate reason for her dissatisfaction with life...

:iconbravoplz: This was definitely one of the deeper mini-stories that I have read. It's amazing how potent the story is without going into every detail.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you very much for reading the entire thing. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :iconhappytearplz:
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NinjahClaus Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Man, I thought Reader-chan was going to sit on their graves, and let the temperature take her away to Ludwig and Gilbert. ;n;
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh man, that would be terribly depressing. ^^;
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NinjahClaus Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
BUT IT'D BE THE PERFECT ENDING ;n;
A perfect kick in the feels!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't think so.
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NinjahClaus Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww.... well, you're the author. Maybe I read too many depressing endings for Reader-chan.
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CandyBlueStar Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013
This... This is amazing!! You are one AWESOME writer!!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Daww, thank you very much~ That means a lot to me! :iconcblushplz:
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CandyBlueStar Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
Your welcome xDD Continue writing bro!! :3
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karinchan97 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Student General Artist
*speechless*.........
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CaptRedgrave Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm emotionally wrecked but my goodness that story was just absolutely beautiful.
And I think I have to call it quits for the internet and go to bed now...
 :iconlazypoolplz:
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, I'm sorry. Thank you for reading, nonetheless. ;v; Goodnight, as well. 
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AwesomeDragonSlayer Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student General Artist
awe man I'm crying....(such a beautiful story) 
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you for reading~ Sorry about the tears, though... 
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AwesomeDragonSlayer Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Student General Artist
I wasn't wailing, just a tiny bit of awesomeness was leaking out...... '3'
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Lizardhero123 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
Cricket: Very well done... *sniff*
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~
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XxMaximumRide14xX Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Im crying so much. This story was wonderful. Great job :3 <3
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you very much for reading~ :thanks:
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XxMaximumRide14xX Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student General Artist
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Aww it was no problem, it really was magnificently written :)
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heartcandy101 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I'm actually crying so hard right now. Great job!!
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