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Ever since my brother gave me the new DLC to a certain game, I've been slacking in my updates. ^^;

I believe there will be one final part. Don't ask about the details because they aren't important, and I'm the type that prefers to leave holes open for my readers' interpretations.

The ninth part of :iconcrazycharlette1415:'s contest prize.

EDIT: I changed a little line in the story that might mean something in the last chapter. It doesn't change the plot, but it changes the impact.

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.

Any similarities to characters, settings, scripts, or stories from other pieces of literature or media are purely coincidental.

This story belongs to me, *GydroZMaa.

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:iconbluewolfhanyou:
BlueWolfhanyou Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015
Wat...WHAT?! NOOOO!! Why you do this to MEE?! *cries* g-good job anyways...
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:iconmary-sutcliff:
Mary-Sutcliff Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I was like wait... *reads on in silence* *cries*
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:iconxxmaximumride14xx:
XxMaximumRide14xX Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student General Artist
o-o This story is amazing!!
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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
:iconcryingplz::iconnuuuplz:
:iconsexygermany2plz::iconsexyprussiaplz:
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:iconadmiralasshat:
AdmiralAsshat Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student General Artist
But the story is great regardless
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:iconadmiralasshat:
AdmiralAsshat Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student General Artist
DX I still dont understand what is going on!
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:iconthe-panda-bread:
The-Panda-Bread Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He's DEAD!!! D,:
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:iconponygurl433:
ponygurl433 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This is so good. :iconcryforeverplz:
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:iconbreezytheninjaboss:
BreezyTheNinjaBoss Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconcryforeverplz: What?! They are-? *continues crying for a minute* Okay i'm fine now. This is so sad...i love it. This is too good, I didn't expect the ending at all.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's not done.
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:iconbreezytheninjaboss:
BreezyTheNinjaBoss Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student General Artist
I know. I don't know whether i'm going to cry or flip out?
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, the last part is out now.
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:iconbreezytheninjaboss:
BreezyTheNinjaBoss Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Yay! I love this.
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:iconjolkona123:
Jolkona123 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
What the…… I don't know why but for some reason I think that Gilbert and Ludwig are clones now.....
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:iconangelotheninja:
AngeloTheNinja Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student General Artist
I definitely wasn't expecting them to be dead. This story, all in all, was just so amazing, with it's uniqueness. I've never read a story, at least within the Hetalia fandom, that is so scientific and thought out, and the same with all your stories. But this is definitely probably my more favorite of your stories, because of how you incorporate everything into it. I just- I don't even have anymore words! I'm sorry my comment ran on longer than expected ^^;
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You make it sound like it's over. There's one more part. :XD:
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:iconangelotheninja:
AngeloTheNinja Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
True, true. I just felt the need to express it right at that point xD
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:iconchirikomasashi:
ChirikoMasashi Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Why?! They...died?! :iconruncryplz: :icongermanyemocornerplz: .....*cries hard*........
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:iconshaoridragonblood:
ShaoriDragonblood Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Well done. The whole story was really interesting and had several unexpected changes.
I usually don't cry about stories but... you got me shed some tears. Good job.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry. Thank you for the compliment nonetheless.
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:iconshaoridragonblood:
ShaoriDragonblood Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
There is no need to be sorry. That some people cried about what happened in the story only shows that you reached their hearts. And if I am not mistaken this is one of the most difficult things in writing.
(I am sorry for my horrible English...)
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's fine. I can understand what you are saying. Thank you, again.
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:iconink--rainbow:
Ink--Rainbow Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:iconclapplz:
Girl......you just blew my mind......
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:iconsherlock-status:
sherlock-status Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
When I saw "porcelain" the first time I assumed that Reader had been somehow turned into a doll, and I was somewhat right. But mostly wrong. ^^; Too many fantasy novels for me~
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I almost did that, but I figured magic stuff was more up England's alley.
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:iconsherlock-status:
sherlock-status Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Writer
Too true.
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:iconreddeathhots:
RedDeathHots Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME GYDRO?!!! MY FEELS!!! THEY'RE EVERYWHERE RIGHT NOW!! AAAAAGH!!!!! :iconsobbingplz:
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry...:icontissueplz:
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aSiAnLiKeThAt Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
oh my gosh.... i cant handle my emotions at this point.....
im literally starting to cry right now heh...

Beautiful job! I like how it's suspenseful... gives me the chills :)
It's still hard to process that the potato brothers are (assumingly) dead...
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i think imma go cry in the corner... :iconruncryplz: :iconamericasulkplz:
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Potato brothers?

Sorry about the emotions.
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:iconasianlikethat:
aSiAnLiKeThAt Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
i call them potato brothers since they apparently like potatos
like the two italys, they're the tomato brothers
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I just call them the Vargas brothers and the Beilschmidt brothers.
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SnazzyWriter Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
Wow...never saw that coming...I loved it! Definitely a shocker! Keep up the good work mate (:
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:iconfrecklelemonade:
FreckleLemonade Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
M-My feels... :iconwhywouldyoudothatplz:
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry...
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:iconfrecklelemonade:
FreckleLemonade Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, it's okay! I liked the story a lot! Great job! <33
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YukiMinamoto Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OH MY GOD, SO READER WAS AN EXPERIMENT?!

Well, I was sort of close. XD

And damn it all! Ludwig had to die! WHY?! I'm guessing that the timeline's around the early or mid 1900s or something like that, and then the scientists captured her, she fell into a deep sleep, and woke up in the 21st century.

AND LUDWIG! GILBERT! MY FEELINGS!! :iconruncryplz: Why did this have to happen?! WHY????
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Interesting interpretation.
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CrazyCharlette1415 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, lord.

The feels...

It's just so...

Argh, I can't word my anguish properly...

:iconmiseryplz:
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's okay...
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:iconsilentarrow:
SilentArrow Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What

What

What

no

why

no why

//dead

We are very sorry to inform that this Deviant is no longer able to continue this message due to an unexpected death caused by a massive attack of "Feels."
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh dear...
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:iconbookaddicted:
bookaddicted Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
Oh my feels! The battering their taking!!
Could you please write a Ludgwig point of view after she (or is it "I"?) was taken away?
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry, but the impact it would deliver wouldn't be the same. I want to limit this story to the reader's point of view. The holes are for you to fill as a reader.
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:icondeviousraptor:
DeviousRaptor Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:iconimdeadplz:

This Deviant can no longer respond, due to the fact she has recently died of feels. We are preforming project Porcelain on her so she will be able to comment on the final chapter. That is all.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Mm, I hope the process is successful...
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:iconsakoyo-squared:
sakoyo-squared Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
QAQ Why must you do this to my heart! Nevertheless, beautiful work~
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Because I don't have a heart. >: D

Because that's how I wanted the story to come to a close. Thank you for the compliment.
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firemaster298 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconcryforeverplz:
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww... :icontissueplz:
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