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~Chapter 45~ Final

“My tears!” you shouted at the top of your lungs when Mathias handed over his cape to your dragon and you gave his brother one of your layers.

“All those hours I spent mourning for you! All of those tears wept and swollen eyes and fits of hiccups! Give them back! I almost went mad, damn you! Give them all back, I said!”

Emil blushed and shied away behind his cape. Lukas, on the other hand, stepped in front of his little brother to defend the both of them from your onslaught of meanderings and punches.

“_____________, you have to understand that if my brother’s body didn’t expire—Hey! Stop that! I mean it! Don’t make me do something drastic!”

“You’re the worst!” you screeched and continued to pummel the How-Dare-He-Lie-To-You Sucker Dragon Dung Fish-Face over and over again. All the while, the other dragons were watching in mild amusement.

Emil tried to step in and hold you back. “______________, calm down. I didn’t mean to make you so upset!”

“You, too!” you snarled. “Both of you! You are both terrible dragons!”

You jabbed a finger at Lukas. “I thought that maybe if you stayed in my heart all of this time, you would have picked up a few things from your brother, but I was wrong! You’re still the stinking, rude, no-good liar you always were!”

Lukas clicked his tongue in irritation. “Mathias are you going to just stand there? Do something!”

“I don’t see any problem,” Mathias replied. It was hard to tell if he was serious or not.

“Useless fool!” Lukas spat.

“I can’t believe you two did that to me!” you hiccupped. “I thought that Emil was really…”

A delicate finger reached up to your cheek and brushed a tear away.

“_____________,” Emil murmured, “I’m sorry I had to do that, but I knew that if my brother and I didn’t convince you that I was dead, then you wouldn’t have allowed my soul to rest. It was necessary in order for the shadow to be completely wiped clean of existence.”

“That doesn’t make any sense!” you wailed. “Nothing makes sense! I thought you died! I thought both of you had died! Damn it all! Do you think it’s funny to make me cry?!”

“No!” the dragons both answered in unison.

You cursed and wiped away your remaining tears with your sleeve. “I’m not going to forgive you guys, you hear me? Thanks to you, I’ve been taken from my home, nearly eaten several times, killed on more occasions than I can account for…! And the tears! How many times have you made me cry?! Have you ever thought about how I felt?!”

Emil bowed his head to the ground. “Many times, _____________,” he quietly confessed. “I’m aware that I’ve been selfish several times since my brother and I took you from the castle. Yet, all the same, I do not regret choosing you as my vessel in the slightest.”

Lukas sighed and crossed his arms. “Nor do I, ____________.”

“Insensitive morons,” you grumbled.

“On another topic, didn’t we say we were going to ask my brother about that, ___________?”

You flinched. “N-No! What in Eliatha could you possibly be talking about, Emil? I never said I wanted to ask Lukas anything!”

Lukas raised an eyebrow. “What’s this all about?”

Emil chuckled. “It wasn’t exactly me who was travelling with _____________ after you died, but I distinctly remember my projection touching on a topic I think you would find quite interesting.”

“Really?” Lukas responded looking less than interested. “Care to enlighten me?”

“Well, my projection asked about whether or not ___________, here, might have considered being in lo—”

“Don’t say another word!” you quickly snapped and smashed your hands onto your dragon’s lips.

“Aw, but I wanted to know what it was!” Mathias whined from behind you.

“There’s nothing worth hearing!” you told him, your face feeling hotter even more than when you had been bathing in the hot springs.

“Actually, I really do want to know what it was you were talking about now,” Lukas said peering into your eyes and trying to break down your defenses.

Emil tried to speak, but your hands held fast onto his mouth.

“I hate to interrupt your reunion, but I think the rest of us have something to say,” one of the dragons spoke. Immediately after hearing that, you took your hands away from Emil who had silenced his voice to allow the dragon to speak.

“Dragonheart,” the dragon began, “in the time we have been inside your heart, we have all been made aware of the remarkable purity, courage, and love the humans are capable of expressing. Your achievements and determination have touched us all in ways that we are not able to describe, but all the same, we feel that it is only necessary that we thank you for everything you have done and opening our hearts to a different side of humans.”

The dragon turned to Lukas.

“Of course, even though your heart has touched us all, not everyone will be willing to admit it aloud. I speak for all of us, Dragonheart. I speak for all of the dragons you had saved.” Then, the dragon bowed its magnificently scaled head to the ground. The rest of the dragons—including Lukas, Emil, and Mathias—did the same.

“Oh…” you blushed. “That’s, um…very…”

What am I supposed to say? These are dragons, not humans!

“You’d be surprised at how much the dragons have opened up to accepting humans because of you.”

Emil! you gasped.

“Just a simple ‘You’re welcome’ will do, _____________.”

Right! Um…

“Y-You’re v-very wel—! You’re very welcome!”

“You are granted an audience with perhaps every dragon in Eliatha, and that’s the best you can do?” Lukas groaned as the dragons rose.

You made a face. “Oh, really? Th-Then…why don’t you try telling me what the whole point of that kiss was right before you died? Was that really necessary to pass the flames over to me? And why not? Let’s spice it up by telling everyone since they’re here!”

Lukas froze. The color began to rise to his usually pale cheeks. The only thing that was visibly moving was his pair of sapphire blue eyes. They looked much better being back in his head.

“Well, you see, the reason I had to do that was because an instinctual urge compelled me to be gravitated towards your presence, ____________, and by the time I realized what was going on, you had your lips sealed on mine and—”

“You liar!” you shouted. “That’s not what happened! You told me to get closer to you, and you even held on to the back of my head!”

“Lukas kissed _____________?” Mathias piped up.

Emil buried his face into his hand. “Actually, Lukas, you were the one who kissed ____________. Her memories do not lie.”

His brother cursed. “You’re not getting anything out of me.”

You narrowed your eyes. “Would you like to test me on that?” you growled. “Don’t forget what I can do to you, Lukas.”

The dragon’s sapphire blue eyes glimmered with a mysterious light. “You wouldn’t dare.”

“You want to try me?”

“Stop it!” Emil cried stepping in the two of you before you went at each other’s throats. “This relationship isn’t the kind that will make dragons and humans coexist with one another!”

Lukas snorted and continued to stare at you. “How about this? If you call me ‘Big Brother’ from now on, I’ll promise to never say a bad thing about your dear little Dragonheart ever again.”

“Do it!” you snapped at Emil. “I’m sick of always wanting to go for his throat!”

Mathias’ lips twisted into a mischievous smirk. “That’s not true. You love each other, don’t you?”

MATHIAS!!!” you and Lukas yelled.

“Oh dear…” Tino sighed as he and the rest of the dragons watched as the two of your bolted after Mathias.

“They can’t run away for long,” Berwald said as Mathias scrambled to squeeze through the dragons in the crater.

Tino chuckled. “I don’t think it will take them too long to realize their feelings for each other with Mathias and the Wings of the Opal Skies with them, don’t you think?”

“Indeed,” Berwald agreed.

“Hey!” Emil gasped as he struggled to keep an eye out for his Dragonheart and his brother. “You guys, cut it out! I’ll call you Big Brother! Just don’t kill anyone!”


Lukas cursed. He didn’t understand how Mathias could get so used to constantly walking on foot, wearing uncomfortable clothes, and eating such tasteless food all of the time. Even though he and Mathias had parted ways a long time ago, life as a human was taking some getting used to. At least he still had most of his previous dragon powers from before giving up the Sapphire Flames.

“What’s wrong?” his younger brother asked noticing how frequently he was sneering.

Lukas fiddled with the uncomfortable cross-shaped pin in his hair that ____________ had fashioned for him. She had said it would force him to practice putting on a nicer face in front of humans since he looked so tense most of the time.

“It’s these damn clothes and this damn hairpin,” he growled. “I hate them. I don’t see how any dragon could put up with this.”

Emil chuckled. “I’m sure you can put up with a few inconveniences for ____________, can’t you?”

Lukas remained grumbling incoherently to himself and crossed his arms. “What’s taking her so long? Didn’t she say she wanted to get to the next village by sundown?”

“It shouldn’t be too long. She’s just telling a story to the villagers.”

The sapphire-blue-eyed dragon rolled his eyes. “That again?”

“Yep,” Emil smiled.

“We don’t have time for this. I don’t want to stay in one place any longer.” He began walking towards the center of the village. “Stay here. I’ll go get her.”

“Whatever you say.”

Lukas gave Emil a cold stare. Emil sighed.

“Whatever you say, Big Brother.”

“That’s better,” the dragon mumbled and continued on his way.

As Emil had mentioned, ____________ was surrounded by a circle of children and even a few adults and elders as she told them the story of her adventures with the dragons. At first, Lukas and Emil had been afraid that the mark on her heart would burn her to ashes, but it would have appeared that it, too, had vanished along with the shadow.

“…Then, the Wings of the Opal Skies looked deep into the Dragonheart’s eyes, and said, ‘I’m sorry.’ And, with a final look of resolve in his amethyst eyes, he lifted a shard of glass as sharp as a knife in his hands…”

The children gasped.

“…and he plunged it straight into his heart.”

______________ paused to let the story sink into her listeners’ brains.

“B-But…” one of the girls sniffed. “What about the promises he made with her? I thought they were supposed to live happily ever after!”

______________ gave the children a reassuring smile. “The story doesn’t end there. The Dragonheart was sad, of course. The Divine Keeper of the Sapphire Flames was sad, too, but there was nothing they could do for their long lost friend and brother. He had sacrificed himself to vanquish the shadow and bring Dragonfall to an end.”

“And…?” a boy spoke up. “What happened after?”

“Then, the Dragonheart returned to the fire mountain. Her heart felt like it weighed of a thousand stones, and the journey was hard. Even so, she was able to make it with the power of the flames of the world and the guidance of the sapphire-eyed dragon in her heart.”

Lukas couldn’t help but crack a smile.

“When the Dragonheart returned to the mountain, the remaining dragons were sad to hear of the Wings of the Opal Skies’ sacrifice, but before they could mourn, the Dragonheart had to give her dragon back his body.

“But would you believe what happened when she did? All of a sudden, a bright blue light filled the mountain, and then…BANG! The sky was suddenly clear, and the Dragonheart found herself not looking at one dragon, but hundreds.

The children gasped in awe.

“It turned out that aside carrying the flames of the world, the Dragonheart was also carrying the souls of all the dragons the shadow had consumed. That’s why her heart was so heavy.”

“What about the Wings of the Opal Skies?” a child asked.

“I’m getting to that,” ___________ smiled. “When the Dragonheart realized what had happened, she saw that there, walking in front of her, were the Divine Keeper of the Sapphire Flames and his brother, the Wings of the Opal Skies.”

“Hooray!” the children cheered in relief.

“But…” _____________ continued, “everything was not completely as it was. In the process of giving the Dragonheart the flames of the world, he also gave up the Sapphire Flames, his very identity as a dragon.”

A girl blinked. “So that means…”

“He wouldn’t be able to turn back into a dragon anymore.”

“How sad…”

_____________ giggled. “It’s not as sad as you would think. Why don’t you ask him for yourself?”

Then, all of the villagers turned to the direction of her eyes and fell on Lukas.

“Are you finished, _____________?” he asked feeling uncomfortable being the center of attention to unfamiliar humans. To his shock, the children began to scramble after him and surrounded him in a clustered circle.

“Divine Keeper of the Sapphire Flames! Is it true that you hate your name because it’s so long?” a girl asked tugging at his tunic.

What?” Lukas gaped.

“Diviner Keeper of the Sapphire Flames, is it true you really kissed the Dragonheart?”

Lukas angrily turned to ______________.

“______________, what absurdity have you been feeding them?!”

“Just something to spice up the story!” she laughed.

“Lukas, is it true you love ______________?”

“I—Tha—What?” Lukas stammered. “________________!”

“I didn’t say anything about that! Honest!”

“Alright, children, cut it out,” Emil said shooing the young villagers away. “My brother doesn’t like getting all the attention.”

“Annoying little pests,” Lukas hissed under his breath.

“Hey, now, they were good listeners,” ______________ said walking over to examine him. “And you aren’t the most well-behaved person, yourself.”

“He’s getting better,” Emil pointed out. “I’ve been noticing these things more than you have.”

______________ sighed. “I suppose you’re right about that.”

Lukas made a face. “Can we please get going now? It’s going to get dark soon.”

“Alright, alright, mister Divine Keeper of the Sapphire Flames. I still think you don’t deserve that title anymore.”

“Then I don’t think you deserve my attention.”


“Heh. I got you.”

“Oh, you stupid—!”

“_____________, there are children still present,” Emil whispered into her ear.

“Then we best be leaving so I can give your brother a punishment,” she huffed.

“It’s about time,” Lukas growled.


Once the three of you were on the road again, Lukas began to talk as he normally would. You noticed how tense and awkward he would become when being around other humans besides you.

“Why do we even insist on walking?” he sighed. “We could just have my brother carry us one by one to our destination, and we’d be there in no time.”

“Silly Lukas. What’s the fun in that if we aren’t travelling together? And besides, once Emil is all grown up, we can ride on his back all we want.”

“You make it sound as if I don’t mind,” Emil mumbled.

“I’m sorry, Emil. Did you not want that?”

Emil shook his head. “I don’t mind at all. I just thought it would be strange since I would have thought my brother could be flying alongside me.”

Lukas sighed. “After all of the rotten luck I’ve been through, I don’t think being in a sky would be a good idea anymore.”

“There you go blaming everything on me!”

“It’s because it’s always your fault.”

“Not always!” you huffed. “What about when you insisted we take the other crossroad? How many days did it take for us to get to the other village again?”

“I was tired.”

“Liar! You said dragons never get tired!”

“Your voice makes me tired.”

“I can’t believe I have to put up with this…” Emil groaned.

You gave your dragon a squeeze. “Don’t worry Emil. “I’ll make sure you stay by my side forever. If he bothers you, I can get rid of your brother.”

“Then what would I have been saying ‘Big Brother’ for?”

“Oh, right. You have a point.”

“Why in Eliatha should you get to keep my brother?” Lukas growled.

“Because we are connected through our souls and hearts!” you answered with a significant amount of passion.

“And we’re connected by blood,” Lukas reminded you.

“And you two are connected by your love for each other!” Emil burst out saying.

“N-No we don’t!” you squeaked. “We fight a lot! Can’t you tell?”

“That statement is about as valid as _____________, here, is intelligent,” Lukas snorted and looked away. The two of you ended up shutting your mouths to prevent yourselves from saying anything stupid and out of line. Emil didn’t have a problem with the silence. Dragons were prideful creatures, after all.


Dragons, as told to you by Emil, were able to fly above the clouds and see what the world might have been like if Dragonfall hadn’t taken over Eliatha. You, on the other hand, still found the clear sky, the bright sun, and the brilliant mysteriousness of the moon to be all so fascinating. Tonight happened to be a full moon. Emil had also told you that every night the moon would either get bigger or smaller depending on the cycle of days.

“Fancy seeing you up so late,” a familiar voice said. You could hear the faint rustling of the grass as someone walked up to your side and sat down next to you.

“Hey, Lukas,” you smiled.

“Hello, _____________,” the dragon said in response.

“Is Emil asleep?”

“Yes. I think he’s tired of listening to us bickering all of the time.”

“You know I don’t mean half the things I say to you when I insult you, right?”

“I knew that a long time ago.”

“So why do we fight?”

“Maybe we care about each other in ways we’re unfamiliar with.”





“Remember a long time ago, back at Eldur Mountain, Emil was about to say something, but I stopped him?”

“I remember.”

“I can tell you about it. Do you want to hear it?”

“Go ahead.”




“You’re not sick, are you?”

“No, it’s just…hard to say.”

“Is someone dead?”


“Then why is it so hard?”


“________________, I’m leaving if you don’t tell me.”

“No, wait! I’ll say it!”

“I’m listening.”


“Go on.”

“I l—”


“I love you.”



“Yes. I knew that for a long time.”

What?! Why didn’t you say anything?!”

“I was waiting for you to say it first.”

“You lazy liza—hold on. ‘Say it first?’ What do you mean by that?”

“If it’s what you think I mean, then it’s that.”

“That doesn’t make any sense!”

“I know it doesn’t. It’s the most complex human emotion I’ve felt.”



“Oh…Lukas, you…”

“I do, I do. You don’t have to say it aloud.”

“You’re right, I don’t. You should say it.”


“Because…it’s more romantic?”

“Your lack of knowledge in confessing is disappointing a lot of people.”


“Never mind. Pretend you didn’t hear that last bit.”

“Um, okay?”


“What? So you’re really not going to say it?”

“I am! Just give me some time!”

“I’m waiting.”

“…___________, I…”

“Go on.”

“Playing the same game, I see?”

“I’m waiting~”

“Rgh! Fine! I love you! There! Happy?”



“Your lack of romantic qualities probably disappointed a lot of people.”

“Excuse me?”

“Nothing, nothing.”

“…So now what?”

“I was hoping you would know what to do since you’ve done it before.”

“It wasn’t for romantic purposes…”

“Was it?”

“…That’s something you don’t need to know about.”

“Alright, I’m talking about right here and right now. Are we supposed to…you know…do something?”

“I’ve never done it as a human before.”

“Yes, you ha—Whoa! What did you say?!”

“Be quiet! Do you want to wake my brother?”

“B-But…! What you said about never doing something as a human…what exactly were you referring to?!”

“I was joki—Ow!”

“Don’t joke about stuff like that!”

“I’m surprised you even knew what I was talking about.”

“I’m not a child! I’m old enough to know about that!

“Heh. And yet you still cry like a baby.”

“That’s because you two worry me!”

“I’m sorry.”


“What? Did I say something wrong?”

“You said you were sorry…”


“It’s the first time.”

“Huh. I guess you’re right.”

“That makes me happy.”

“That’s nice.”

“I have no idea how I fell in love with you.”

“Me neither.”

The End


Thank you so much for reading~!
Well, readers, this is it: the last chapter to The Dragonheart. I can honestly say there was never a dull moment in writing this for me. Every chapter was like a new step in the adventure that the reader in the story went through, and it made it even better being able to have people awaiting each chapter when it came out. I never thought that this story would get the attention it received, nor did I expect to get such positive feedback from all of you. I can honestly say from the bottom of my heart, "Thank you." Thank you all very much for taking the time out of your lives and the patience to read my story--especially those who helped me point out little grammar and spelling mistakes every step of the way.

I mentioned somewhere in one of the comments in a previous chapter that the Asians would be making a special appearance in the future. If you have finished the story, you can see that it hasn't necessarily happened. That's's a secret--a secret that I will not be able to get to for a while because I have other things I want to finish before getting back to them. I promise that I will include them somewhere else in the future. But until then, this truly is the end of The Dragonheart. Thank you all very much for reading this story. No amount of words I say will be able to express how grateful I am to have had such a supporting audience.

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.
This story and picture belong to me, *GydroZMaa.

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sailormoonnerds Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not good at big rambles
So I'll keep it short and simple.

That was amazing.
I couldn't put my phone down
You really should think about writing a book.
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
*Laughs* It's fine. Thank you very much for reading~
Da-Mad-Catter Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015
Okay. Prepare yourself:

This was amazing. AMAZING. Totally awesome. Why haven't you written an actual book yet? I would buy all of your books if you wrote. This was legit the best story I ever read. And the feels! The way you twisted the plot around was so creative! Not one bit was cliche at all. I kept trying to guess at what would happen next, but the storyline always flipped and had me on the edge of my seat (couch?).

I had heard about your Dragonsight story (the Denmark one) and checked it out, but then I realized there was a prequel (silly me) and decided to read it first. May I just say... BEST DECISION EVER. Then I just HAD to read it all within 5 hours.

You captured all the characters perfectly and made the whole thing just so realistic, and I kept getting swept into the events so quickly and thoroughly! THE FEELS THOUGH. I have got to come back to this. You actually made me cry, and believe me, my tears are saved only for the best and most tragic. When everyone kept dying, coming back to life, and then dying again (like, gosh!!) I was just an emotional mess. But in a good way uwu. You are totally awesome and I wish I had the privilege of meeting you in person so I could properly congratulate you and maybe give you a hug too ^.^;

You deserve 100 standing ovations. A+++ for you.

Love, Izzy
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahhh, sorry for the emotional roller coaster ride, but I hope you had fun while you were on it! Thank you for reading the whole thing!
caramelkitkat Featured By Owner Edited Sep 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Agh- you should be an author. All along the way I was expecting something cheesy to happen like a kiss between the two characters towards the end, but you did it in the Middle. I was so glad it was you that accompanied me on this long, hilarious, angsty trip, and oh my lord I was so excited to read the next chapter every time.

Thank you so much for writing this. There was so much fluff that made my stomach go funny that was soon replaced with anger and then laughter - you as an author have a very special way of dragging people in. I cannot for the life of me WAIT to start reading your next series.

( I apologise profusely if none of this makes any sense, it's just me rambling to myself. Oh my lord I was so glad I am watching you X3 )
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh, it's perfectly fine! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading!
RoKurosawa Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2015  Student Writer
Taiga and Minori (I miss you hug) [V1]This is probably the best story that I have ever read, I love it so much~~~~!!!Heart Love Heart - Free Heart - Free Llama Emoji-03 (Sparkles) [V1] Emote Cuddle Love Spread the love I'm probably going to re-read this at least three more times in the future (haha, probably a lot more than that) Spooky Scary Swiggity Swooty Marionette (Chat Icon  - love your writing so much by the wayAdorable Girl Anime Emoji (Kawaii Jump) [V6] Heart Love 
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my. Thank you very much~
TechieTapper Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Its finished? *whiney sounds* aww

This was so good! I remember first reading this, and i never expected this!
Ah welp i enjoyed this and now i must find somthing to do with me life
Ma-chan17 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yey! Finished! such a sweet ending! Yasuko Takasu (Fangirling) [V1] Broken Fighting Dome (Kawaii Please)

This story is just so perfect. I don't have anymore words for it. ♥ Just thank you that you wrote this!
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for reading, and you're very welcome!
Ma-chan17 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah well I really enjoyed it. :)
frostfur78 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015



Im so sad it ended ;-; but thank you so much for sharing your creativeness! It was amazing!
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome, and thank you very much for reading!
frostfur78 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2015
you're welcome ;-; i'm excited to read Dragonsight :3
BlueKitten06 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2015
I really love this story. It trully is amazing with all the adventures and sad as well as happy moments. I am glad (very glad) that I came across this fanfic. ^^ I will be reading the sequel ^^
PeaJayers Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015
This is the fourth time I've read it all the way through and I love it more each time I do! Thank you for creating such a fantastic story ^-^
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome, and I'm glad you can still find enjoyment in it! :aww:
Mikylafairytail Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2015  Student General Artist
This story was amazing
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for reading!
ElectricalMiNx Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I've read this on quotev and still gives me the fangirls!! I wish I can write something like this!!! >w<
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
It's entirely possible as long as you put the time and effort into it. Oh, and have decent imagination. I've seen a few that are...yeah.
ElectricalMiNx Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know how ya feel...
Whispers-of-Stars Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This was honestly one of the most(if not THE most) beautifully written stories I've ever read. Your writing talent blows me away. I am absolutely in love with this story! The plot was so intricate and the characters were portrayed perfectly! This is definitely my favorite Norway x Reader! You did an AMAZING job with this!!!
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Daww, thank you very much for reading~
bobo12345678910 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015
This story was well written and not a character was OOC. If this was any other story, I'd say that the ending was rushed but it fit beautifully into the plot.
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for thinking so~!
Danuvius Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
This FF was killing me with different emotions. No, really. You made me happy and sad, somethimes even both and much more. This FF is really good writen. ;u;
The storyline is amazing and the writing style. I'm so happy that I found and read it. ♡
Your ideas was fantastic and how you brought it to letters. I enjoyed every chapter.

Now I'm going to read Dragonsight.
Keep writing. :heart:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh, I don't mind the long comment at all. I'm always grateful to those who take the time to leave comments and read my stories. Thank you very much~ ;v;
EarlyBirdie-Dancer Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015
I absolutely loved reading this! Made me laugh and cry, if this was in a bookstore I'd so buy it! Thank you so much for writing it! You are an Amazing writer! I wish I could write like you! Good job! ^_^ *Applause!* Bravo!
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Daww, you're very welcome, and thank you very much!
EarlyBirdie-Dancer Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015
Lol, my sister was laughing at my reaction when I was closer to the end. The story got so intense I had to force myself to take a break and calm my nerves. XP now I'm enjoying reading the sequel! :D 
The-Right-Girl1 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Student Digital Artist
*smiles widely*
I had forgotten how fantastic of a writer you are, and how wonderful this story is! I'm glad I decided to go through my (many, many, MANY) favorites!
Write on!
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my, thank you~
MissParkSungMi Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I love this story soooooooooooooo much that I can't put it to words! This one is my fav of all! Its the first longest chapter I've ever read you did really good job- No.. EXCELLENT!!!! :iconyaynorwayplz: Ah... I can't put it to my feelings... I just don't know! I think I'm going insane!!!!!! Anyway this is the greatest story I've ever read! No kidding!
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my. Thank you very much for enjoying it! :aww:
TheDragonPotato Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
SOOOOO amazing!!!! I cried and laughed(all in one night). This truly one of the best stories I've read in a while and it didn't even seem like a fanfiction, it seemed like a story all of it's own. You really have a knack for putting people in the story and that's super amazingly cool. Thank you so much for writing this story. I'll be sure to keep my eyes out for the next chapter of Dragonsight(no pun intended). Please keep writing because I will definitely read! 
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome, and thank you so much for taking the time to finish it all the way! :aww: 
BlueWolfhanyou Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015
Awwww, it's over already? Wow,
What an amazing journey and an amazing story! Thank you so much for writing it, it was beautifully done. It was alway exiting and I never got bored or skipped parts, I practically ate up every word! I had soooo manny feels attacks that I can't even count, and amazed and awed at the length of it. You truly out did your self! So thank you, thank you for writing it, for working hard for us, for taking time to do this, for everything evolving this spectacular story! I have already started the next one, "Dragonsight" and am loving it! See you there!!
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
*Laughs* I love how you say "already" when it ran at 45 chapters not including the preview, filler, and bonus chapters. :XD: 

But seriously, thank you for taking the time to read the entire thing! 
Shadowitaly1 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I love this fanfiction this is my second time reading it i think but, its still my favorite!!! I actually thought i could have been a real published book because it was so good!!!
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my. Thank you very much for your dedication and reading through twice. :blushes: 
Shadowitaly1 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I just realised while reading the story again but you wrote a Romania x reader , sustenance pact, that is my second favourite fanfiction that I've read maybe 3 times or so. I guess I must really like your writing style XD.
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh, I appreciate it. TvT
HickoryTree Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my goodness, I loved this story so much!

This is my 3rd time rereading it, and I can't even begin to describe how grateful I am to you for writing something so beautiful! This is truly the most amazing fanfiction I have read, making me cry, laugh, and smile all in one minute! This story has had the greatest impact anything I have ever read has had on me, and I still can't thank you enough for taking the time to write something so perfect and vivid and realistic! You developed reader-chan's and the Nordics' characters better than I could ever imagine them!

Again, thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story!! I loved it more than any fanfic I have ever read before <3 Keep up the insanely awesome work!
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my, the 3rd time? Ahh, I'm so flattered... :iconembarrasedplz: Thank you very much for reading it so many times and enjoying it so much! Oh, and thank you very much for the points!
HickoryTree Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
It was my pleasure~ You deserve every point, favorite, and watch you get!
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Daww, thank you for thinking so~ :iconcblushplz:
Friskie140 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014
Omg I looooved it.
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for reading!
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