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:icong6force:
g6force Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
"Lukas’ soul hadn't been in his heart; it had been in his eyes."
so that's why they're so blue
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:iconimaftf:
IMAFTF Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist
Wait wait wait wait wait wait! WHAT? 
My baby dragon~ NOOOOO!
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:iconlozgamer316:
LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Did...did Emmy just commit suicide?
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:iconmermaidgirl548:
Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
"Let's just say, I'm greatly disturbed you managed to carry my eyes around for so long."
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Best. Line. EVER! XD
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LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha hail yeahs!
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:iconmermaidgirl548:
Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014
I almost died laughing. X'D
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:iconstarsapphire9601:
StarSapphire9601 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
“Let’s just say, I’m greatly disturbed you managed to carry my eyes around for so long.”

so what?! I'm a complete Stalker-freak >_<


oh and....fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
D: *cue for mental breakdown*
laslas na friend (self-hurt yourself now, friend)
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:iconleiraah:
Leiraah Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist
Noooooo Emil!! EMIIIIIIIIIL! You can't! You can't, okay? You still have to call Lukas 'big brother'!! Don't you dare you little... aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww *cries*
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Yxmathenobody2 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
“Let’s just say, I’m greatly disturbed you managed to carry my eyes around for so long.” *bursts out laughing so hard I can't breathe* OH GOD XD
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:icontoshikoyoshikuni:
ToshikoYoshikuni Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
HE WAS MY BEST FRIEND, YOU BASTARDO OF A DARK MASS EVIL THING! I WILL PERSONALLY DESTROY YOUR VERY ESSENCE WITH MY BARE HANDS AND I WILL MAKE YOU WISH YOU WERE IN HELL! YOU WILL RUE THE DAY YOU DECIDED TO FUCK WITH ME, MISTER SHADOW BEING.



......I think it's time for that Canada fluff now. ._.
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:iconfrenchlouie:
FrenchLouie Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
Oh my gosh, my feelings D:
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:iconcrystalrainbow8:
CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Lukas screamed out your name—your real name." Wait... WHAT'S MY NAME? *is confused*

BUT NOOOO!! EMIL!! Forget post-story depression! I'M DEPRESSED ALREADY!! :iconcryingplz:
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:iconpokepal5:
Pokepal5 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Wait..... Emil? Emil?? EMIL?!? NOOOOO
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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
:iconshockedplz:
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:iconoh-my-maple:
Oh-My-Maple Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconconfusedprussiaplz: Not sure if I should cry or be confused...
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:iconmidnightshadow88:
MidnightShadow88 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nightmare by Avenged Sevenfold. Best song to listen to while reading this.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I finally got around to listening to it. It's a little extreme and upbeat for this chapter. ^^;
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:iconcarmaxanime:
carmaxanime Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
(0-0)
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:iconstupidbread:
stupidbread Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
;<; //crai
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:iconchessykat01:
ChessyKat01 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
... No. No. No. Nononononono. NONONONONO!
Y do u torture my heart and fmake my feels overload?!
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:iconkaitlynvang:
kaitlynvang Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wait, if he plunged the shard straight into his heart while trapping "you" between his arms, does that mean that "I" was also hit?
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Iceland is pretty tall. The reader is fine--physically.
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kaitlynvang Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ahh, gotcha.
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:iconmythriltenke:
mythriltenke Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
So this might sound like a really stupid question, but what exactly is "my real name" if it's not _____?
Juuust asking.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Human," "stupid pig," "dumb goat," "idiot," "wench," "wretch"

...

Do I need to give you anymore?
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:iconmythriltenke:
mythriltenke Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
Ahhhh I see now. Thank you.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
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:iconsasura-haruno:
Sasura-Haruno Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-!
I need read MOAR!!!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
For crying out loud, I uploaded this yesterday. I'm doing the best I can.
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Sasura-Haruno Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay, I think i can wait.
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:iconsilentmyst:
SilentMyst Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Did you /mean/ to put 'trapped you between his arms, and plunged the shard straight into his heart'?
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's what I put. What, is there something wrong?
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:iconsilentmyst:
SilentMyst Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student General Artist
So by some chance was Emil still in there somewhere and went to kill the monster-shadow thing or am I just misinterpreting?
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, now that you're on par with the others, you can wait and find out.
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:iconsilentmyst:
SilentMyst Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Alrighty
:iconwait-plz:
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HDawgLuvsAnime Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
My three reactions to this chapter:

1. Lukas, you're back! I guess keeping the eyeballs was totally the right call. :iconyaynorwayplz:

2. Frick, is the reader being tricked? I'd listen to the one who isn't on the verge of possession! I think...

3. :iconsobbingplz: ... Emil, sweetie! Nooo... :icondepressedplz:

I guess Emil was still himself long enough to prevent the shadow from using his body to harm the reader. Oh Emil... This chapter was dramatic as hell and I love it for being so!
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:iconrosie992010:
rosie992010 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
So wait, the fake Emil stabbed himself in the heart? Or is it the real Emil? Whichever it is, this story is amazing!
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xChibiYukix Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*face palms and texts Poland*
Me: bro poland its important

Poland: sup playa, what iz it?

Me: ik you the meme the feels came from u i need one here. NOW.

Poland: sure broski, ill totally have pony deliver it to you~.

*Open box a pony dropped off, has THE FEELS in it, pulls le phone out*

Me: DONT ASK HOW I GOT UR NUMBER BUT THIS STORY GAVE ME THE FEELS ;~;

Gydro: what?? (<--- most likely wat u would say if some one u didnt know texted you that..)
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I don't text so that would most likely be my reaction. ^^;
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xChibiYukix Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Let me rephrase one part,

Me: Ik the meme 'The Feels' comes from u, i need one.NOW.
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Xsign-of-fireX Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gydro. . . how can you do this? You've managed to kill me twice within. . . what, two minutes? You have magic powers, I tell you.

I love Lukas' line about the eyes. . . even with the story being sad and incredible and dramatic, it made me laugh. I'm laughing just remembering it (since I'm too lazy to scroll back up and read it while I type this). I think that was a particularly genius idea, and it makes sense - he does have such pretty eyes. . . (Well, at the moment, I suppose I should use the past tense)

Did you post both of these chapters today? Wow! Made my day totally amazing to see TWO chapters waiting for me. . . :D

Yes, I may take your advice on the eyeballs if I do draw them (I sort of think I should hold myself back from the frantic drawing obsession. . .) - It would probably be a lot more fun to draw reader-tan running around with the eyeballs in a jar than just them sitting in a box.

On to the story again - EMIL! GAAAAAH NO! Stealin' all of my feels, you should be ashamed. . . and LUKAS! OF ALL THE TIMES TO COME BACK! I will expect you to be very, very sad next chapter, no matter HOW emotionless you think you are! *sticks tongue out* AND EVIL SHADOW-CREEPY-BASTARD! YOU SICK FUCK! (Pardon my. . . what would it be? I don't know what language it's from) I HOPE YOU DIE A PAINFUL, AGONIZED DEATH! More painful than the sea serpent, PLEASE. I want you, Evil Shadow Bastard, to die a long and agonizing death complete with burning, drowning, hanging, stabbing, beheading, crushing-with-rocks, and suffocation.

Okay - that's done. Sorry for the long comment - I always try to give longer comments for you (even though I know they're just annoying blather) because I think you really deserve them. :)
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't mind the long comments.

I ended up posting two chapters today: one at midnight and another one a few hours ago. The reason for doing so is too long to explain.
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Xsign-of-fireX Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah - I thought it was something kinda like that. . . A-And I hope you're doing alright, and n-not staying up just to post chapters! I don't know about the other readers, but I'm fine with waiting however long is needed, s-so . . . Gah, I'm just being worried for some reason! ^_^

(And just a bynote - if you get annoyed with all of my random comment-blather, feel free to tell me! I don't mind. . . ^_^ I talk too much online in compensation for the talking I don't do offline, so it's totally cool if you get annoyed with the long talking and random conversations.)
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's fine. Some of the shorter comments are more annoying. I'm not saying your comments are annoying.
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Xsign-of-fireX Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay! ^_^ I just feel very immature for some reason. . .
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:iconarrisorra:
Arrisorra Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
NO NO NOOO EMIL…
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:iconmidoribani:
MidoriBani Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student Writer
Oh noes, Emil killed himself. :iconsadfaceplz:
I can't wait for the next chapter!
By the way, I love how you always post at least one or two chapters every day. >w<
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ScarletMoon-98 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Emil....so many feels....;A;
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ilove966 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
*flails*
Mother of all that is holy this chapter played with my feels.

I think I broke one of my bed boards from moving around so much.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh dear.
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