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Forty chapters?! Why in the world is this story so long?! I didn't mean for it to be long! I just wanted to make an adventure that doesn't feel rushed! Look what it turned into...T^T

But anyway, thank you for sticking with me this entire way, readers. It's fun having more than one person tagging along this ride.

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.
This story and picture belong to me, *GydroZMaa.

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:iconlozgamer316:
LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's 4:08 AM where I live. I'm pulling a fanfic all nighter!
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TheDragonPotato Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Same! Except it's currently 6:42 now. Sooooo tired but it's sooo worth it.
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LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely :)
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Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
"We're here,"
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At the Bone Forest, just purfect.
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ChOcO-PeAcE Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh gosh still reading.. I love this story a lot thank you for writing it!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome. :)
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adrianarosabell Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
I don't think your story is too long I think is a great adventure and I find it more romantic because you took the time to make a good background history of love not based only on sex or stuff like that and actually I feel really sad that this awesome story is coming into and end- it is really to found such good stories, I am crying that there are only 5 chapters left I've wished there left like 50 chapters T-T your story is just so awesome!!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Laughs* I think 45 chapters was pretty decent. 
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adrianarosabell Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
yeah:) (Smile)  but I think t was perfect, as Prussia would say awesome ending from an awesome writer:D (Big Grin) 
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StarSapphire9601 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
this is my 3rd day reading this story...I'm nearly done :D but...I'll feel empty now... :/
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:iconlizzels199:
Lizzels199 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student General Artist
I don't mind it being  so long :D
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lmaoshortie1224 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist
Don't worry, the story is amazing! I think this is the best fanfic i'v read Love  
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beningTrickster01 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
Agreed :3
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Pokepal5 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Hoorah for the fortieth chapter!
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
Loved it ^w^
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Arrisorra Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Ve~ Still love it~
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SweetAppleVinegar Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Heh, forty chapters isnt so long! I've read longer (granted, they were also a bit shorter ;P) and they were still so absorbing and interesting. Thanks for the plot-vital backstory expository, Emil! And the reader apologizes for slapping you (not really). Haha, she actually wants to live with them after all this and perpetuate this merry band of dragons and Dragonheart! Sounds like fun... As long as everyone doesn't die or something like now XD!
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Xsign-of-fireX Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AHHHHHHHHHH CHAPTER FORTY! I CAN'T BELIEVE I DIDN'T READ THIS YESTERDAY! *cries in a corner* I have just lost my position as your daily reader. . . can you ever forgive me?

Okay, self-beat-up moment over. WAY cool! I love reader-tan's little musing about Mathias being able to return to dragon-form. . . :D THAT I would want to see. And when they get to the castle - GAH! Suspense!

As always, you have done amazingly well and I am in awe. :D You rock, Gydro!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are forgiven. :aww:

Ah, they're not going to a castle, they're going to a fortress--although castles are technically just elaborate fortresses with the occasional ruler and such.
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Xsign-of-fireX Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*shot* I knew that. Shush you. *laughing* Is that so? I never really thought of it that way, but that makes sense.
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carmaxanime Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
:iconicelandplz:
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What?
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MidnightShadow88 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a very well written story. It's cute, clever, funny, and always leaves me anticipating the next chapter. I believe you literally could make this a book and publish it. I'd buy it. Unfortunately you'd have to replace the Nordics to prevent copyright. But I'd still buy it.
Again, this story is literally long enough to be a book. Great job getting this far. My stories always stop at like, ten, because I get too lazy.
I log on to dA every time and immediately check my inbox for the newest Dragonheart chapter.
Great story, keep it up!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, I appreciate it~

I don't think it would be a problem changing the names around, though I would have to change some scenes if I want to give the reader an actual name. I'd have to take away that ambiguity factor.
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MidnightShadow88 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You could keep it as second person pov though. Maybe even keep it as a reader-insert. First reader-insert ever sold in stores :D
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No, I don't think that would be a good idea. It would be awkward if boys were reading this. ^^;
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Fyreflare Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Student Writer
Wow. Forty chapters? You are truly an inspiration. I commend you greatly. :iconclapplz:
Wonderful chapter! I always look forward to reading your stories! :D
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you~
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Kitsumi101 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
alasjdfhlkjasdhfkh I will miss this fan fiction when you're done making it T^T but no worry! I'll come back to visit this world again! It's the first one I got hooked onto XD I read it till like 4:50 in the morning only giving me 3 hours of sleep XD
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my...Sleep is more important for your health than reading a story. The story will always be here, after all.
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Kitsumi101 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
XD naw no worries Not being able to sleep is always something happening to me on the computer reading or not :P I don't mind it one bit as long as I catch up on sleep during the weekends. Besides I love this story!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why, thank you~
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FFRules-girl14 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
I can't believe it! You are the one of a few others who have gotten me hooked onto their fanfics that I've followed it through to the end! Most of the time I just look over one chapter of the story before becoming tired of it and moving on!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, thank you very much~
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ponygurl433 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
no, thank YOU for sticking with this story! It is truly excellent and a privilege to read! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, you're welcome~
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StarDreamer1 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I must say that this is the best fanfic I have ever read! Please do not feel bad that it is so long, I love the pace it is progressing at.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you so much~ :iconcblushplz:
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StarDreamer1 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! :glomp:
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KairiStar728 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
Oh come on!!!!!!!!!! Are they really that corrupt and terrible where as they burn dragon flesh? What the crap, stupid people of Elathia and beyond!?!?!?!

Really freaking awesomely fan-flippin'-tastic story, GryoZMaa. ;) You're a great writer and don't let anyone say otherwise!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What else are they going to do with the leftovers?

On another note, thank you for the compliments.
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KairiStar728 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
That doesn't mean they can just do that. What if the dragons burned human flesh? It's the same freaking consept just backwards.

You're very welcome! Someone's gotta remind you of how awesome you are on a regular basis. ;{D
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Iceland mentioned that dragon flesh burns slower than wood so it can be used as ideal fuel for warmth. Human flesh smells bad when burnt, too, because of the fat and the things they eat.
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KairiStar728 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
Well yeah. But it's still mean... *pouts in defeat*
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Muzukashiko Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Student
Ice is such a cutie! This story has the right pace not to much not to little what more could one ask for! Haha~ love it good work~
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you for thinking so.
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calypso12 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
Make it as long as you need to. A super long story would be awesome, but it just depends on the author. This story is awesomely more awesome than Prussia.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my. Thank you so much~ :iconembarrasedplz:
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ScarletMoon-98 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don'tcare if this is gets to be over 100+ chapters!! I love this story!!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*Laughs* 100 chapters would be overkill. ^^;
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