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Too tired to think of a witty description.

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.
This story and picture belong to me, *GydroZMaa.

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:iconimaftf:
IMAFTF Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist
Such a cute atmosphere~
Such an adorable chapter.
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Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
Wow, the "Are you in love with my brother?" conversation sounded like the "Onii-chan" canversation.
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Parissimmons Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
She wont say shes inlove~ sorry i thought it suites the chapter! 
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adrianarosabell Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
I love this story is just so creative and unique I have all romance, action, adventure, fantasy and a good English! 
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ice-the-dragon Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014

 me reading :aww lukas I actual really miss him...


 sister: are reading that story again we have school in 30 min


lme:shut up and let me be happy or I punch you and you cant get to school


 sister: then I would stay hoke say I hurt myself and finish the story to bug u :)


 me:troll alert traoll alert!!


sister: mom maker her take it back!

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StarSapphire9601 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
“Was he a good kisser?”

that made me threw my hand in the air and dropped my hanky (which I used for dying my tears up)
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AndreaTheChinchilla Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh reader-chan ;) you are so inlove with Lukas
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Leiraah Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist
Oh Emil you troll xD I thought was Lukas the troll in this story, though... well, 'like older brother, like little brother'!
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LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ha you've got that right
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blackdiamond63 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You my dear are a truly talented writer! Have you considered publishing any of your pieces? I think you should! Anyway, on to the next chapter!
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CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Trolling like a boss! XD Norway's troll would be proud lol
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MistDream454 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
Pshhh I don't get flustered.... :blush: :3

I agree though ^-^ Like older brother, like younger brother .-.

Them trolls cx
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The Reader has a personality of her own.
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mikumikumiku1 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
God. If this were a book I'd read it fifty times over and over again.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, I appreciate it~
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
Loved it ^w^
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not to be rude or anything, but is that all you can say? I mean, I appreciate you taking the time to comment, but I'm the type of person who prefers insightful comments or no comments at all.
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
I'm truly sorry if I can't come up with insightful comments after reading stories... Maybe I shouldn't comment on anything at all then... Sorry for being a pest with my comments.
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Flyingmintbunny32 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Student Artist
Um so he relvealed her, me, reader person thingy AND GOD I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO CALL IT
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Singing-Wolf-12 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Yay~! Lukas can still come back~! "I" shall succeed (I hope)!!!
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XlKittiezlX Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
XD So Emil has some of Lukas' douche trolling personality :iconohohoplz: Im so happy now that its not all depressing
You should keep writing like this! If you had any of your work published I'd soo buy it
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LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree. Author-chan has an awesome ability to mess with your feels. I'd totally buy this if it was published without hesitation
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, I'm not worthy of such a compliment. :iconembarrasedplz:
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XlKittiezlX Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
Of course you are! I wish I could write a fanfiction just for you but I REEEEAALLY suck at writing :iconsweatdropplz: AND NOW I WILL GIVE YOU A CHIBI AMERICA :iconamericaheroplz:
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, that'll do. I'm not the type of person who makes requests for fan fiction anyway.
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XlKittiezlX Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
Oh okay then :iconeweplz: Can I call you onee-san?
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Erm...sure.
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XlKittiezlX Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
XD sorry Im just so hyper from reading to much and Ill be more hyper once I eat too much candy tomorrow...:iconsweatdropplz:
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ceciliethehedgehog Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
HAHAHAHA :D one of the funny parts
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Rainacornasusgirl Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist
saw a typo. you did a bit of a yoda

it was "will happen something to me as well"
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, thank you for pointing that out.
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Rainacornasusgirl Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist
no prob^^
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KaterinaTheStorm Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Fear the power of nordic trolls Reader-chan.
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Arti-Z Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XDDDDD this chapter <3 oh emil u awesome douche face...Well while norways "Dead" this is what hes up too [link] xD
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This story doesn't take place in our real world so a Norwegian army doesn't exist.
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Arti-Z Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh I know...it wasjust a joke ....^_' a heh...
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SweetAppleVinegar Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
We now find out that Emil has some of Lukas' douche-troll spirit ;P. I love how easy and natural the reader and Emil's relationship is; they, of course, are bound to each other because of the whole Dragonheart thing, but they almost have a sibling-like bond. ALMOST. (because being nude in front of your sibling is totally natural XD) I'm also happy to see the reader's optimistic and sassy nature return so quickly; she's definitely stronger in spirit than previously before. Loving your stuff, as always!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You make it sound as if you're completely updated.
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SweetAppleVinegar Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Lol, not quite. Since I had abandoned DA for a bit, I had to go on an entire chapters' worth-run on your series and comment each chapter before reading the next so... I don't know ?
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cuppiecakiee Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I laughed like crazy while reading this xD
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carmaxanime Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Love it.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
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carmaxanime Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
No need to thank me you are just that awesome
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agatstone Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Great as always. This part really made me smile and laugh a bit near the end.
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HDawgLuvsAnime Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Ha ha! They really are brothers! :XD: Though I can see the reader is being a bit of a Tsundere here, isn't she? :iconohohoplz:

This shadowy being honestly sounds very threatening. I'm very worried about what's going to happen from this point on, especially since he may take control of Emil again. I also found it interesting that killing a dragon is a great sin in the world. I kind of like how it highlights the ignorance of the humans who kill the dragons for 'protection,' but end up dooming their souls in the process; as dark as it sounds, it's seems like poetic justice.

This chapter was very informative and awesome! I can't wait to see what happens next. :iconcoolstorybroplz:
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, don't be so na´ve. Tsunderes aren't the only ones who would deny having feelings for people. The reader is not a tsundere.
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HDawgLuvsAnime Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Sorry, I meant for that line to be a joke (I forgot to indicate it as such. Oops! :iconawkwardsmileplz:). I know her character isn't confined to being a tsundere.
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1StarTwinkle Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Omgosh, you made me laugh so hard. Too hard that my brother was looking at me wierdly, he doesn't understand the beaty found in Hetalia! I could choke him, maybe, nah, love him too much. But he's still a idiotic brother.

And about Emil...forget Lucas! I have found new found respect for Emil and I enjoy it. But Lucas was an interesting guy. Hmmmmm, well, until Lucas comes back Emil can keep my pretty lil' heart safe >w<

And yes, this would make an epic anime. If this were an anime, this awesome story, I'd watch it a billion times, cry and laugh and just plain enjoy life!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I could never choke my brother. He's got the face of Thailand and Hong Kong, but the exact attitude of Iceland. Perhaps that's why he's not that hard to write about.

This story will probably never be made into an anime, but when writing the story, I picture it as such.
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1StarTwinkle Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
Really? My brother is more like well, Prussia, egoistic but amusing. Though he looked more like England minus the bussy brows.
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