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My little break was nice. In my absence, my roommate watched hummingbird nature programs.

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.
This story and picture belong to me, *GydroZMaa.

EDIT: Shoot! I added an element in the story that wasn't supposed to be added yet! OTL It was pretty subtle so I don't think many readers will remember it.

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:iconthedragonpotato:
TheDragonPotato Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
The tears are flowin' like a river right now. They just can't stop!
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Kyoko-Kimo Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HIS... EYES ARE MISSING TO!? SHIT!
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IMAFTF Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist
Man, I am tearing here. 
My tears are a tidal wave.
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LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Call me big sister *initiate creeper stare and Jeff smile*
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x-Spark-x Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Honestly I don't think Emil has a bad side, i'm thinking the voice 'I' heard was Lukas' voice. 
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StarSapphire9601 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
Sane Ai: S-sorry *cries* I'm so mean of calling you douchebag Emil...sorry....
Insane Ai: *laughs Insanely* YAY~ my other stupid personality is back to normal~
Neutral Ai:......Emil's right...that's the exact feeling I had....all the pain and dark emotions I didn't express al those years...
Insane Ai: *eye rolls* oh brother...
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:iconmixedmuttneko-chan:
MixedMuttNeko-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I have gone INSANE!!!! Oh, wait. I am insane!
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:iconleiraah:
Leiraah Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist
Awwww, Emiiiil <3 *hugs* now call me "big sis" and I'll forgive you ^w^
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Greenlandic Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconawwplz: that last part made me happy.....holding hands in the snow together....so warm and cuddly for the cold of Dragonfall........
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CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icontearplz: Emil's old self is back~ But his evil self still exists, I have a feeling.
But, but! Lukas has a chance of living again! *happy dance*
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TheGirlSniper Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
*Joins happy dance*
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FarDreamr Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eh, I was wrong, but oh well
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
Can't wait to read the next chapter ^^
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Oh-My-Maple Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
;w; I hope there will be a happy ending... but wow I'm commenting my reaction to every chapter... I hope it isn't annoying...
Well even if it is.......
I'll just continue doing it enyway :icontrollrollplz:
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Bethwuzhere Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
the feels man....all of my feels.....
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:icon14pip14:
14pip14 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
i take back what i said before. yay lukas can lie.
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14pip14 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
stupid key board. i meant live.
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SweetAppleVinegar Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Man, the more I read your stories, the more and more I appreciate your writing style. You truly reach out to the readers' emotions... Before cruelly tugging and twanging on them like the strings of a ukelele :XD: but really, the way Emil and the reader interacted at the end over Lukas' death was so gentle and emotional, and ending paragraph gave such a beautiful visual of them in their mutual sorrow :') it makes me happy and sad at the same time!
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HDawgLuvsAnime Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Oh, man. What happened to Emil in that fortress? I'm almost too scared to find out.
It's so touching that Lukas transferred only part of his flames into the reader so she wouldn't be consumed by them. I hope we can still save Lukas. I don't want him to 'fully' die or become corrupted.

I'm heading on to the next chapter!
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stupidbread Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
;<; Lukassssss
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sweet-Angel-juju Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
“I can’t afford to let IT look inside your head. If IT did…”
The IT, is kinda disturbing me, is that what you were not supposed to add yet? If it is, then I'm sorry I've brought it up... I'M JUST SO CURIOUS (waiting patiently for next update)
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No, I already removed it from the story.
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FFRules-girl14 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
This was...amazing! I actually had to blink a couple times to stop myself from crying!
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Muzukashiko Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student
Whaw~ stop takeing my feels!! Haha I love the platonic link between reader and Iceland. Super cute and give me an attachment to him! Good work as always and such!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why, thank you~
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MRXLB Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
and so the amazingness carry on :D this is some of the best fanfiction I've ever read! ;)
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~
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StellaMarris Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful update -as always! Flawless in every way. It was a joy to read.

So... Something is controlling Emil? Or at least invading/living(?) in his head. That's the only reason that I can think of as to why Emil doesn't want Reader to look in his thoughts. Unless he, I dunno, has a secret crush on Reader. Of course, I don't see that because I picture Reader as more of a sisterly figure to Emil. Then again, that's just my perspective, and the whole story has been in her point of view, I get that she feels that way.

Anyway! Too much rambling. Dragon hunters, huh? I wonder if the Asians are going to come back in. Then again, they obviously weren't the ones that took Emil, so they might not come back. I wonder who it will be. Hm. Well, I think that you can use pretty much anyone. You haven't really used a lot of Hetalia characters so far -just the Nordics and the Asians, I believe, and those are just two groups.

I will anticipate the next chapter with bated breath!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*Laughs* Iceland's talked to the reader many times in the past. The bond they share isn't one of mushy gushy love; it's mainly just intimate affection.

I don't want to throw in too many canon characters into this story because it'll make it harder to keep the plot consistent. As far as I'm concerned, this might be it for new characters. The Asians will make a special appearance in the future, though.
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StellaMarris Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah. I think that Emil and Reader have a good healthy relationship. It seems pretty innocent. At least when Emil's not all crazy-wacko when he's being a jerk face. Of course, I'm sure that it will be revealed how that's happening pretty soon. They're like... Friend-siblings. Kind of partners in crime, but they haven't really done any crime yet. It'll probably get there sometime though since their going to the dragon hunters.

I can totally understand that. When too many characters are added into a story, it's gets totally ridiculous. I like that you limit yourself on the amount. And yay! Even though they're the antagonists, the Asians never cease to amuse me.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
They are not partners in crime. Do not make that assumption. I don't plan on plain out revealing what sort of relationship Iceland and the reader have, but it's apparent enough so you don't have to go around naming it. Such things shouldn't be named because it restrains the boundaries of their interactions and how they feel about one another.
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StellaMarris Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Eh. True. I guess you really can't put a name to their relationship since it's pretty complex. And yeah, naming things can be pretty restraining.
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celebies Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student Writer
Well... I didn't realise I had written such a long comment. Ahaha. I guess I was too involved in expressing my inner anguish that I lost track of... well, everything LOL. but it's not as long as it seems because a third of that comment is me quoting my favourite part
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's fine. I've gotten long comments before.
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celebies Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student Writer
I'm supposed to be asleep by now because I need to wake up early but... meh.

I found the ending of this chapter to be very bittersweet and touching. Bitter because, well obviously, they were crying, but sweet because of the reason why they were crying; Lukas. It's like you ripped out my heartstrings and stepped on them before shoving them back in, all shredded and mush. The scene really goes to show how deep bonds with each other goes; how precious Lukas and Emil has become to ____ and vice versa. Even with this heavy heart, I am still able to smile considering how much they have all grown close to each other. So yes, beautiful, beautiful, beautiful chapter.

I also wanted to say that the language you use, the vocab and phrases, the way you structure your sentences - flawless. It perfectly expresses the soft, bittersweet atmosphere of this whole chapter. I liked the dialogue as well, especially towards the end. Quite tearjerking if you ask me.

“___________, if you want to cry, you should cry,” your dragon said. “I know how you’re feeling. If you’re hurt, then I’m hurt, too. Don’t hold it in. It’ll make things even worse.”

“No, no, I’m fine,” you lied and attempted to force a smile only to have it twist into an awkward frown. “This is just—Some snow got in my eyes.”

Emil wasn’t convinced in the slightest. Without uttering a word, he reached his hand out and brushed an escaping tear away from the edge of your eye.

“You’re lying,” he said in a soft voice.

“Yeah,” you chuckled. “I know.”


AGH. My favourite part of this chapter, hands down. Every word of description, every word of dialogue... it was like a bullet to my heart. Probably just me, but I really loved this moment. It's just very beautifully written.

Onto other things, I am very curious to find out what this supposedly 'dark side' of Emil is amongst other things. And the flame. And Lukas.
AGAIN, so many questions, so little answers!!

Extra little note; I absolutely adore the interactions / relationship between Emil and ____. I love their characters too : ) Emil is just so precious.

Love this, I'm looking forward to see what happens next. ♥

P.S. Sorry if there are some mistakes in this comment, I'm really sleepy and I'm not in the mood to read over this ahehe.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why, thank you~ I'm glad you like my writing style.
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lynchkidme Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THIS WAS THE BEST READ IVE HAD IN A LONG TIME, KINDA SAD BUT LOVED IT
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
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agatstone Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
This made me sad but I'm still excited for the next part
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Stephie-chan559 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Also I have not been waiting till 1 in the morning to read this!!! * has a guilty smile*
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh dear. Sleep is important, you know.
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Stephie-chan559 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah I know thats why I don't do this sorta stuff but I was just So dam excited and I was also up writing my manga!
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Stephie-chan559 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You made ma day cause here in the uk it's only 7:25 am!!! :)
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad I could do that.
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CrazyCharlette1415 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hummingbird nature programs?
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, like nature shows on hummingbirds.
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CrazyCharlette1415 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, okay.
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AnAwkwardBlue Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
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0-EmoLeopard-0 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Omigod YAY, you updated!

Lukas might not be dead! //screECHES
OMIGODOMIGODMOMIGOD
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course I updated. I said I would.
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