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I've had to format these chapters a little differently because there's a distinct lack of dialogue and action-packed scenes. It takes a little bit more work.

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.
This story and picture belong to me, *GydroZMaa.

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Kyoko-Kimo Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What. I don't understand the context at all. XD
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layla-mindora Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so confused right now
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:iconimapop13:
imapop13 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014
you. Fucking. BITCH!!!! WHY DO YOU MESS WITH MEH FUCKING HEAD??!!!! YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW MANY EMOTIONS YOU PUT ME THROUGH?!!?!!! FJSOANRISJW! Good story though. It makes you want to keep going
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd rather you not call me a "bitch." I find it rude and degrading. 
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imapop13 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014
I'm sorry. I didn't know you would be offended by that... But then again, anyone would be offended by that. I really am sorry
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's just something to look out for in the future, as professionalism equates to credibility. Try to refrain from doing that again. 
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imapop13 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014
Thank you for reminding me. I was being ignorant and rash
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LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
-_- I'm Lukas's vessel thingamajigy now, yeah?
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:iconmermaidgirl548:
Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
Let me guess. I'm now Lukas' vessal. (sorry if I spelled wrong)
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StarSapphire9601 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
Sane Ai: I'm glad to see you back to normal Emil *smiles sweetly*
Insane Ai: I'm also glad seeing you calm down Sane *eye rolls*
Sane Ai: So, can you please explain me about your attitude awhile ago....douchebag....
Insane Ai: and tell me about How-you-fucking-escaped-from-the-stupid-humans (I'm a Shinigami =^=)......*eyes wide open* S-Sane....shit....
Sane Ai: Hm? What's wrong bitch? *smiles sweetly*
Insane Ai: oh no....
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RoisinDubh9542 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
First Lukas dies (Reader-frau's LOVE INTEREST FOR GOD'S SAKE!), I obtained the Sapphire Flames through a purple-bloody kiss that meant nothing, Then Emil gives me this bullsh*t Piss-poor attitude, AND NOW I'M NOT EVEN CARRYING THE FLAMES OF THE FRICKIN' WORLD IN MY HEART!?!?!?

:icontableflipitplz::iconsaysplz:LUKAS BETTER COME BACK AFTER ALL THIS AND LOVE ME LIKE THERE'S NO TOMORROW OR I'M GONNA BEAT HIS ~ss!!!
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RoisinDubh9542 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ASS. I tried to censer it withan @
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AndreaTheChinchilla Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Another plot hole... Why is he normal again D:
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AndreaTheChinchilla Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How the fuck did he escape? Plot hole D:
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:iconleiraah:
Leiraah Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist
God this is sooooooo confusing!! >A<
and Emil, dear, I hope you're just joking and later you'll turn into the kind and sweet Emil that I used to know *Russia's aura*, da? ^J^
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ToshikoYoshikuni Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
THANK JESUS CHRIST ALL MIGHTY I'M NOT CARRYING THE FLAMES. That would turn out very bad. ^ ^;
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CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
... So what the heck am I carrying then? *is so confuzzled, so she continues reading*
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:iconfardreamr:
FarDreamr Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Half way through this something clicked, I think I know what happened to Lukas >:)
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:iconpokepal5:
Pokepal5 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
YOU ARE OFFICALLY THE BEST WRITER EVER. Wait, I never had the flames? NUUUU
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah ha ha...I wouldn't say I'm the best, but thank you for thinking so. :blushes:
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
I am so confused >_<
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XlKittiezlX Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
:iconclapplz: YOURE THE BEST WRITER EVER!!!! :iconletmehugyouplz::iconsupertighthugplz:
On a side note:
Sorry i havent commented until now...:iconsweatdropplz:
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
N-No, I'm not the best. There are plenty of good writers out there. :blushes:
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XlKittiezlX Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
Well your the first I actually liked :iconeweplz:
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14pip14 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
NORWAY BETTER BE COMING BACK OR I WILL FIND YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(not being a total creeper, just love norway that much)
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SweetAppleVinegar Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Ehehehe... DON'T TOUCH THE READER'S CHEST, EMIL. I DON'T CARE IF YOU WER JUST CHECKING FOR THOSE BLUE DRAGON FLAMES, NO TOUCHY.

...on a more serious note, I wonder what made Emil act like a jerk to the reader >.< ah, it must be a shock the reader that she's not carrying the Sapphire Flames!
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romanoslover Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Question: If lukas died, how can this story still be a norwayxreader story?
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Uh...*Shrugs* Because he kissed the reader?
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:iconromanoslover:
romanoslover Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
but he's dead and the story is still going.
It's like life O.o
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, life's pretty cruel.
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Cheshiere Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Moar plz
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Please do not ask me for more. I upload as frequently as my studies allow me to.
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:iconcheshiere:
Cheshiere Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Kay, sorry I did not mean to pressure u
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TheDarkPheonix Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lukas is inside me.










That sounded wrong.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No. His memories will forever be preserved in our minds. There's nothing inappropriate about that.
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xoxrocketdawg561 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I absolutely love this story! I commend you for being able to upload everyday, I'd never be able to do that. ^__^
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, thank you, and you're welcome.
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ceciliethehedgehog Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
auch, the last thing emil said, must reaaally hurt her.
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winterpixie1 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
I just decided to work my way around DA enough to find the watch button for you (rather than manually check every second day). I stumbled upon this story last week, and it impressed me way more than pretty much any other fanfiction story I've read. I love this story, I think you're an amazing writer and you've inspired me to pick up my pen again. Your story is imaginative, your style is beautiful (and at times hilarious!) and you do a good job of portraying the characters. There is great consistancy within your story, yet you manage to keep your readers guessing. Amazing job, please keep it up!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, you flatter me~ :blushes: I'm not worthy of such praise. My writing's just a hobby that people coincidentally enjoy reading. Thank you very much for the compliments and the watch~
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StellaMarris Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So... If she isn't carrying the flames, then is she carrying Lukas? That strength/healing has to come from somewhere since she's been pretty helpless in the past. Also, the dragons can control the movements of the vessel. Exciting!

I will wait patiently for your most glorious update.
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celebies Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Student Writer
new reader! ♥

This is such an amazing story! Hah, I even spent the entire night reading and catching up, and I decided to make an account here so I can keep up with updates and stuff! Gosh, I love this story so so so much, especially because its a fantasy story. I love the world you've created and the plot and dragons and sjdhksdfj and especially your characterisation of Lukas! You have a wonderful imagination (and excellent writing skills to boot) ^u^

I'm looking forward to see what happens next, seriously. I've been a wreck ever since chapter 33 I hate you I can't believe-- he's not gone forever right? just when he was gonna..? but why? ugly sobbing And as for Emil... I don't know what's up, but I still love you, you cutie.

LOL I have so many questions and so little answers!! My head is spinning with possibilities and and and-- ugh. even with the headaches and whatnot I. LOVE. THIS. STORY. SO. FREAKING. MUCH. No, really, favourite scenes of this story will be replaying in my head for like the next few weeks. It's what happens whenever I read a good fantasy story ahah. ♥♥
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I'm surprised my story would be worth reading at such a short amount of time. ^^;

I don't have much else to say to your lovely compliments other than "Thank you." They've really made my day/night (since it's past my bedtime of the day I should be awake).

Ah, yes, and thank you very much for the watch, too. I greatly appreciate it. :aww:
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celebies Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Student Writer
I'm just the type of person that gets immersed into stories very quickly, ehehe.

And you're welcome! I'm glad they made your day/night! : )
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Happybagels123 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
Can't wait for the next one!!
Good job!!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~
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Arti-Z Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*Claps like an idiot* I HAVE NO CLUE WHATS GOING O HAPPEN NEXT BUT IM HAPPY :,D But Emil, your so confusing wasnt he just calling her a human and he was so mean now hes just...What??D: Aw man~ <3 this story~~
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Angelgem Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
its never easy is it........ -_-'
this is really interesting and well written!!!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
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Reruuu Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Can I just tell you, (I think you'll find this quite amusing)
That today I went with some friends to OZ Comic-con (comicon in Perth Australia *squeee*) and after squeezing
through crowds and browsing, parading in cosplay, I saw a
plush stand in the corner of my eye. My friend noticed that
The stall had caught me eye. I don't know what overcame
me- but I ran to the stall, picked up a ginormous blue dragon and hugged it tightly while shouting Lukas.

If your wondering- yep I bought it -w-'
IT'S SO GODDAMN SQUISHY AND FLUUUUFY [link]
:iconcannotevenplz:
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