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Sorry for updating so late. Wednesdays are really long for me. Midterms are right around the corner. I had to also handle a little story theft problem, but it should be taken care of for now. Thank you for the support.

On another note, the comments from the previous chapter were really amusing.

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.
This story and picture belong to me, *GydroZMaa.

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:iconkyoko-kimo:
Kyoko-Kimo Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHY IS ICY SO MEAN!? ;~;
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:iconstrikerstar01:
Strikerstar01 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
Bad Emil *sprays with spray bottle* bad don't mess with reader-chan
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:icondreamselfycreated:
dreamselfycreated Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Student General Artist
my oc's reviews! XD

tess : *goes into the story and bitchslaps emil* .....

atlantis : oh umm.... am i still pure!?

natelie : *not paying attention*

scarlet : emil emil! whats the matter? play slapped by the spider? *twiches eye*

Icon Sign Part 1 Icon Sign Part 2 Icon Sign Part 3  : my review
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:iconimaftf:
IMAFTF Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist
WHAT'S HAPPENING?! 
I don't know what's going to happen~
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:iconlozgamer316:
LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Emmy Imma beyotch slap you so hard you son of a puffin!
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:iconpolarbearninja2:
PolarbearNinja2 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YOU ARE CRUEL
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:iconstarsapphire9601:
StarSapphire9601 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
and then my personalities debates again:
Sane Ai: *bitchslap Insane Ai* fuckard!
Insane Ai: ......what did I do?
Sane Ai: If it wasn't for your stupidity and Insanity, Emil would've remained pure! This is all your fault poptart!
Insane Ai: Um......you do remember that we're only one person right? One person with two personalities
Sane Ai: .....*cries more*
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:iconandreathechinchilla:
AndreaTheChinchilla Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww fucking dammit why Emil! He was my favorite! And now....:(
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:iconfullbustermetalzoro1:
FullBusterMetalZoro1 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is the second fan fix to ever make me cry....and I've read too many to he healthy....
Listening to Alexander Rybak's song 'If You Were Gone' and 'Abandoned' isn't helping me
This story is breaking my heart
and Emil isn't helping
But I love the emotions you weaved into this, some being important but revealed subtly and the more minor ones being obvious.
Your writing skills are incomprehensibly amazing, such to make me believe you could become a very famous writer in your life time.
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Wtf happend to Emil, I shall find out I presume?
Oh Lordy...Lukas' body...is sexy and dead...XD sorry random thoughts I'm vomiting in a comment
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, thank you for the compliments. :thanks: If you haven't already, you'll find out what became of Iceland. 
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:iconfullbustermetalzoro1:
FullBusterMetalZoro1 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
my pleasure! 

I shall read forth and find what came over him.....
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:iconthegirlsniper:
TheGirlSniper Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
EMIL!!!
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:iconhetalianatalia:
HetaliaNatalia Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student Artist
hory sheet.... Ms Gydro you mam have just made my soul cry, my heart cry, and my eyes cry and those tears started crying themselves.... those feels... I'm like completely broken </3... but it's beautiful too... This is the first reader that has ever made me actually cry... for like 2 hours.... i love you for doing this no homo.. ;-;
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh. I made your tears cry? I am so sorry about that... :worry:

Eh...but thank you for enjoying the story thus far. :thanks:
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HetaliaNatalia Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student Artist
I finished the story holy crap i would totally read it all over again. Thank you please right more stories about the nordics. You are fantabulous and amazing!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, and thank you. 
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:iconleiraah:
Leiraah Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist
EMIL YOU SON OF A PUFFIN!! *cries*
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:iconask-mara92:
Ask-Mara92 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...Rightinthefeels... :iconfeelsplz:
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:iconsakkocchi:
sakkocchi Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Would you please shut up?"
Real!Me: :iconiloveitplz: Lukas!!!! ♥
Reader-chan: "Emil, is that really you?" Emil:'' Of course!"
Real!Me: :iconmadlynotimpressedplz:
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:iconxxriptidexx:
xxRipTidexx Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This made my night oh my god.
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:iconsakkocchi:
sakkocchi Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconohstopityouplz: waaa~ thank you. Actually, i was really pissed off in that moment ~(^u^~)
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:iconthelifemadeofdeath:
TheLifeMadeOfDeath Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohhhh you raised my hopes up so high

And then you mugged and shot them in an alley way

Okay imma go cry now yerppzz
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:iconyxmathenobody2:
Yxmathenobody2 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know right?
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:iconthelifemadeofdeath:
TheLifeMadeOfDeath Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed
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:iconyxmathenobody2:
Yxmathenobody2 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*just read a comment under this* Emil's just on his period, hun.
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:iconthelifemadeofdeath:
TheLifeMadeOfDeath Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep bitch just ain't of his cycle 
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:iconlordofstupidity:
LordofStupidity Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
Well, Lukas did say Emil wasn't very pleasant before using Reader-tan as a vessel.
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:iconxxriptidexx:
xxRipTidexx Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't think he meant THIS unpleasant though. ;w;
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:iconlordofstupidity:
LordofStupidity Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
Yeah, that was before I read the rest of the chapters.
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:iconcrystalrainbow8:
CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
TT^TT Emil's back... but he's soo mean...
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:iconenbi-to-miruku:
Enbi-to-Miruku Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student General Artist
My childish senses told me in a hopeful way that Emil might just acted that way to take her out of that terrible mental state.

Or he had to take vessel in a corrupted heart...?

This story is so captivating!
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
Why must you turn evil Emil T^T
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:icondubstepcat:
DubstepCat Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Emil's on his period.
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:iconyxmathenobody2:
Yxmathenobody2 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*dies of laughter* YES.
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Oh-My-Maple Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for making me happy after this chapter... I thought I would be crying all the time bacouse of Emils change of heart (or soul or whatever) This realy made me laugh xDDDD
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:icondubstepcat:
DubstepCat Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's my job >:'D
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:iconoh-my-maple:
Oh-My-Maple Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconlaughingplz: Yup!
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:icondubstepcat:
DubstepCat Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhandspazzplz:
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:iconmiabia100:
Miabia100 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nevermind
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:iconshuru10:
Shuru10 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Even though I don't know how this would work. Maybe Emil's soul went into another person (who's evil or has that personality), and that's why he's like that. :iconwonderingplz:
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XlKittiezlX Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
I just died....again
:icondepressedplz: :iconcanadasulkplz: and lost my sanity :iconruncryplz:
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:iconinsanitysending:
InsanitysEnding Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconwhywouldyoudothatplz:
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SweetAppleVinegar Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Whoa, who turned on Emil's PMS mode? Haha :XD: the reader is so shocked by this, she can't even! It's pretty fascinating to see Emil act so mean like this, and then see how the reader copes with his off-behavior in return. Love what you do :)~
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
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:iconstellamarris:
StellaMarris Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't think that's Emil. If it was, then wouldn't Reader feel pulled towards him like before? She wouldn't need Emil to tell her the direction that he is in. So, I don't think that it's really Emil. Also, I don't think that Lukas is dead. If he was, then the title could no longer be NorwayXReader since Norway is no longer "available" so to speak. I think that maybe, when Reader got the sapphire flames, that Lukas went into her heart as well. I think that because the flames are connected to his heart, so wouldn't they both go into her? That's what I think at least. Also, Lukas did say that he knew magic -pointless magic -but to a dragon, what's pointless exactly? If it's a spell for healing, I bet that dragons would see it pointless since they are kind of indestructible.

Well, whatever you do with the story is up to you. I can't wait to see how this continues -yes, I know that there's another chapter to read, I just wanted to go ahead and comment -. I have faith that you'll keep weaving an awesome tale that will keep us readers guessing until the end.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"Whatever you do with the story is up to you?" Were you attempting to sway me in a different direction by making all of those assumptions? Either way, I find it rather amusing to see people guessing--even if most of them are wrong. :P
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StellaMarris Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nope. I was just saying that it's your story, not mine or anyone else's, so what happens is solely what you want to happen. I wasn't trying to sway you or anything, just tell you my thoughts. I think it's good to have readers engrossed in the story and actually trying to figure out what's going to happen. It's kind of like those crime/mystery shows where you keep making assumptions and hypotheses to guess who the killer is. (I know that you're not going for a mystery, but the story is sort of a suspense/triller, and you guess in those too.) My assumptions and thoughts are just my assumptions and thoughts. I'm not trying to throw them in your face or to change your mind. When a person likes something, the person tends to want to discuss it and to talk about it. That's all
I was doing. I wasn't trying to offend you or sway your judgement. I actually find it really cool that you have a plot for your story -since a lot of people don't i.e my cousin, my best friend...etc. -so I applaud you for that. I also understand how frustrating it is when people try to change your story. I get that sometimes on mine, and I don't even bother to respond to their comments. I'd they aren't happy with it, why continue to read? So again, I wasn't trying to change what's going to happen. At all. I trust that you will give us a thrilling story that we readers will love.
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I-love-homestuck7261 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
I have seen many of your comments and all I could think is........................................................are you Kankri?



(If you don't know who that is Kankri Vantas is from Homestuck :iconkankriplz: )
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:iconstellamarris:
StellaMarris Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
...Is that a good thing or a bad thing?
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I-love-homestuck7261 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
Neither it's an awesome thing, like awesomer then PRUSSIA............... DUN DUN DUNNNN!
But seriously Kankri is the BEST TROLL EVER and SO ARE YOU! (=^.^=) (next to GHB)
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