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*Reference to a line said by Denmark in Gutters, an emotional story and one of the best Hetalia fan-fiction works I've read. [link] (Sorry for using it at such an inappropriate time...)

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:iconflawlessdeception:
FlawlessDeception Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm thinking that MAYBE it was the Asian family who shot Lukas and took his body parts, and MAYBE Lukas chose Mei as a vessel. MAYBE Lukas isn't dead.

Or maybe I'm just being too hopeful about this.
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:iconravelium:
Ravelium Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014
AHHH! The way you described all the desesperation feels so real. I could even feel there. You did such a good job!!
Girl, you have to publish one day.
P.D.: By the way, thanks for almost tearing my heart.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
A-Ah. Thank you...?
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:iconpolarbearninja2:
PolarbearNinja2 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
“By all that is holy in Eliatha, would you please shut up?!”

THIS LINE MADE ME VERY HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconlozgamer316:
LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That makes two of us my friend :)
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:iconstarsapphire9601:
StarSapphire9601 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
suddenly my two personality debates in my head:
during the first parts:
Sane Ai: *cries and wailed* Whyyy??? by the time I was so madly in love at him...whyyyyyyyyyy?
Insane Ai: *speechless*
Sane Ai: *looks at Insane Ai* it's quiet weird seeing you quiet Insane, I'm expecting you to act Insane and kill both of us
Insane Ai:.........if we die....what will happen to Emil?
Sane Ai: .....and you started to act like me...who easily feel guilty....*cries more*
Insane Ai: *acts Insane*
Sane Ai: *wailed* at least I feel normal seeing Insane being Insane!!


“By all that is holy in Eliatha, would you please shut up?!"


Sane Ai: *cries while laughing* haha...see Insane? I told you you're the most Insane personality in the world, you even made someone say those words, ahh who am I fooling? I bet Aina will become completely Insane, I can see myself laughing while crying
Insaner Ai: *stare at Sane Ai* Sane, I thought it was you....
Sane Ai: ........
Insane Ai: .......

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:iconoreoruby:
oreoruby Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
you were so creepy? Lol
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:iconthegirlsniper:
TheGirlSniper Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
LUKAS!!???
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:iconapplekillingfanfirl:
applekillingfanfirl Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
I read Gutters and cried for three hours straight after crying through it since the second chapter like the crybaby I am and was unable to look at the Nordics (Denmark especially) without immediately tearing up or thinking about the story for quite the longest time.

I've gotten over it since it's been nearly  month since then, but ... I still get depressed occasionally. I don't regret reading it, though. :[
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I was left like an empty void for a while after reading that story. 
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:iconapplekillingfanfirl:
applekillingfanfirl Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
:iconcryforeverplz:
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:iconnoru-kinz:
Noru-kinz Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I must be psycho or something....XD Typical me, ranting and raving to no end, only listening to myself while no one else cares~ I'M CLEARLY IN MY HAPPY PLACE WITH WEIRD CREATURES AND STUFF HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *insane* :meow:
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:icontoshikoyoshikuni:
ToshikoYoshikuni Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Did I awaken him from his eternal slumber?~ Then my raving like a madman was a success! :D
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SnowCat63 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

this is most likely the exact reaction I would have seeing as I talk to myself on a daily basis. Sometimes you are the only intelligent conversation partner to be found

Great job on the story, you is amazing person yes

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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh. Thank you. :thanks:
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:iconcrystalrainbow8:
CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I have grown mad... look at the Reader, talking to herself in the garbage heap lol XD
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:iconyumiblackrose:
YumiBlackrose Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
me going crazy in a dark hole yep sounds like something that would happen......
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:iconpokepal5:
Pokepal5 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Wait, Lukas? YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA B*tch! YOU GONNA GET A PUMMELING! YOU HAD ME WORRIED SICK!
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:iconmrsishida0560:
MrsIshida0560 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Student Filmographer
Lukas! You came back!! :iconsobbplz:
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:iconkaraakuma:
KaraAkuma Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
* being all proud of herself for seeing this coming * I am a bloody awesome genius ( I am tired, don't mind me ).
Anyway, thanks a lot for creating an amazing story and keeping me on the edge so much, it rarely happens with any story I read, so that is why you, my friend, are a bloody awesome genius (too) *grins*
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my. Thank you~ I can't really call myself a genius, though. ^^;
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:iconkaraakuma:
KaraAkuma Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
No seriously, your writing is really good, keep it up like this and I am sure you will be able to publish things in a few years.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You think so? Ah, I appreciate it. :blushes:
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:iconkaraakuma:
KaraAkuma Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
Mhm * nods nods * ...the only thing that might give you some trouble is creating a bunch of realistic and complex OCs ...because anime /manga characters we use in fanfiction are a bit too simple-minded ( I know that what I am saying might sound mean, so please , trust me when I say that I don't want to offend you or criticize your work in a bad, negative way )
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, my first stories did not come from fan-fiction. In a way, my OCs were very well-rounded, but I'm not really comfortable sharing those things on here since they stories themselves are incomplete.
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:iconkaraakuma:
KaraAkuma Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
Yeah, I understand the feeling, pretty much the same for me, seems like there are a lot of stories I just can't finish >_< ...even now I have a prologue of a fanfiction with Romania that I posted (besides the fact that no one tried to read it and give a feedback) I simply don't think I can continue it, have tons of ideas but none seem to be interesting enough >.>
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, well sometimes that can be like a motivation to challenge yourself. I'd offer to give you feedback, but I've been known to tear stories apart so maybe coming to me would not be the best option. ^^;
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
Interesting ending to this chapter ^^
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:iconoh-my-maple:
Oh-My-Maple Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconcrazylaughplz: Crazy!
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:icondubstepcat:
DubstepCat Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmadhatterplz:
A MADMAN IS YOU
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:iconmiabia100:
Miabia100 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I called it!!!! I knew it!!
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:iconshuru10:
Shuru10 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The emotions were SOOOO overpowering in this chapterin this , that POI COMPLETELY FORGOT about the possibility of his his soul (spirit?) could still be there!! :O :iconshockplz:
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:iconxlkittiezlx:
XlKittiezlX Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
LUKAS YOURE NOT DEAD!!!! ...I think :iconsweatdropplz:
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:iconmango-gato:
Mango-Gato Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
from gutters? THE FEELS!
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:iconsweetapplevinegar:
SweetAppleVinegar Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
... Thus, our lovely reader descends into a near state of madness as she tries to ward off the survivor's guilt in the aftermath of Lukas' death. Yay. Also, she called him a wench, which I thought was an insult specially reserved for the female gender o.o I guess not!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoa. Have you been gone all of this time?
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:iconsweetapplevinegar:
SweetAppleVinegar Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
^^; yeah, I went on sort of a DA diet and abstained from just going on the internet entirely. Then I remembered that I was supposed to keep up with your series and then my resolve was instantly shattered >.> *shame*
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:iconramenryu:
Ramenryu Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I just read gutters AND GOD IM SOBBING BUCKETS. IT WAS JUST SO... SO .. Beautiful..

Anyways I love your fanfic too, it's honestly one of the best stories I've read so far, an if you wouldn't mind I'd like to draw a chapter or two into a short comic, would that be alright? I'd give you full credit
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, it's perfectly fine for you to do that as long as you don't sell the work for profit or commercial gain. I'm curious to know what sorts of things you can come up with.
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:iconramenryu:
Ramenryu Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
*sell
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:iconramenryu:
Ramenryu Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
AWESOME~ i won't seek the work- and I'll have something up for you to see sometime this week ^^
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:iconcrazycharlette1415:
CrazyCharlette1415 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconotlplz:

And here you had me riled up.
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:iconcandylover10:
candylover10 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Gutters. Thank god someone else has read it! :D
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually, quite a hefty amount of people have read it. They just don't mention it here because it's not a reader insert.
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:iconcandylover10:
candylover10 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Student General Artist
True.
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:iconcarmaxanime:
carmaxanime Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
Cool I'm the keeper of the flames ha eat that I'm gonna make Lukas call me that now so ha
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:iconmiraclegirl14:
Miraclegirl14 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
After having a really bad day, that last line made me laugh... So thanks. :)


... And I will talk as much as I please, thank you very much!
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:iconkayla-belle:
Kayla-Belle Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
But, see, the thing I like is this could just be some unidentified character we have yet to meet.
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:iconmoon-chan332:
Moon-chan332 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
plz!!! upload the next one!!!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry, sorry. I'm really busy on Wednesdays...
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