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It hits harder than you'd think.

EDIT: Please, please, please do NOT tell me what to do with this story. While I have an ending in mind, the story's is still in its developmental stages. I have no idea how I'm going to get to the ending. With all of these comments telling me what to do, I keep feeling that I might make some people unhappy with my current decisions so do NOT tell me how to tinker with the characters. Please, just don't do it.

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.
This story and picture belong to me, *GydroZMaa.

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:iconartemus2302:
Artemus2302 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
*flips imaginary desk*
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:icondreamselfycreated:
dreamselfycreated Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Student General Artist
Scarlet : oh he'll live cuz he's one of the main characters right?! *eyes twiches*BWAAAAAAA!!!!!!!! *SCREAMS*
Tess comes with norway saying "VHAT?"
*SCARLET COVERS HER MOUTH*
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:icondreamselfycreated:
dreamselfycreated Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Student General Artist
GOSH I MUST KEEP THEM AWAY FROM MAH LAPTOP OF DOOM
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:iconimaftf:
IMAFTF Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist
Lukas...You break my heart in the cruelest way. 
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:iconlozgamer316:
LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Tch he's a trolling arseloch even in death
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:iconpolarbearninja2:
PolarbearNinja2 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THESE ARE BREAKING MEEEEEE
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:icondinorex33:
dinorex33 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lukas is an arse even in death. -.-'
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:iconmary-sutcliff:
Mary-Sutcliff Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my ZALGO!!! I hate you (not really) I hate you so much (again, not really) oh why Lukas!!! I'm just going to curl up on my bed and cry now. I hate my life! (I'm sorry, need to stop raging)
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I-It's okay. ^^; It's nice to know my readers are expressing what I expect them to. 
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:iconmary-sutcliff:
Mary-Sutcliff Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*sniffles* sorry, I usually don't get like that, anyway I should probably tell you that I really like this story, you're a great writer!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Really, it's okay. Thank you very much for the compliment. :thanks:
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:iconstarsapphire9601:
StarSapphire9601 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
fuck....I'm crying like tsunami now!!
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:iconthegirlsniper:
TheGirlSniper Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Awwwww! I thought I was Lukas' vessel! ;-;
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:iconleiraah:
Leiraah Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist
Noooooooooooo Lukaaaaaaaaas çAç
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:icongreenlandic:
Greenlandic Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is now the third chaper in a row that I have been crying........gods, this MUST be good. Ever since my grandmother passed away, It was harder for me to cry, but now i'm crying so easily............
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A-Ah...Now I'm really sorry...
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:icongreenlandic:
Greenlandic Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
its fine........i've healed over time, so im fine...but still THIS MADE ME CRY IT'S SO GOOD!:iconawwplz:
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:iconsweetdiamondstudio:
SweetDiamondStudio Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist
I don't usually cry when reading stories and this was no exception but I did start to tear up and this is really good
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you~ :thanks:
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:iconsweetdiamondstudio:
SweetDiamondStudio Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist
Your welcome and I actual did cry a little near the end.
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:icontoshikoyoshikuni:
ToshikoYoshikuni Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This might be the only chapter that has my childish stupidity at a loss for words. Except for maybe... MY FEELS. LUUULUUU! :icontaigacraiplz: *crawls in a hole and dies* 
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butchlover682 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I'm glad Lukas was trusting the reader enough to give her the sapphire flame burned dead!!! That makes me sad but I can't wait to to read the rest of this finished story 
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:iconcrystalrainbow8:
CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know how you feel with your edit note. *nods*

Well, off to the next chapter!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was extremely frustrating writing the following chapter because of those comments...
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:iconcrystalrainbow8:
CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Fans hope for the best :3
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, but I value plot over popular preference so that's where the conflict came into play.
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:iconcrystalrainbow8:
CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah... It's your story and us fans just need to go with your flow. Besides, its more fun when you make us feel all these feels XD
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:iconhetaliagirl4life:
Hetaliagirl4life Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
THE FEELS OMG I JUST DIED!!!
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:iconhetaliagirl4life:
Hetaliagirl4life Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
LUKUS NOOO WHY DID U KILL HIM OFF???? GOD MY HEART IS BROKEN AND IT HURTS!!!
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:iconpokepal5:
Pokepal5 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
LUKAS!!! I freaking hate you now I'll slowly have the fire eat away at my body!!! LUKAS!!!!
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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
Loved it and poor reader-chan Q^Q
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:iconoh-my-maple:
Oh-My-Maple Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconsobbplz: LUKAS!!
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:icondubstepcat:
DubstepCat Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I..
I.....
I.. don't.. even..
Why, Lukas....?
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:iconshuru10:
Shuru10 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I just hope he comes back. Some way, some how. : :iconcryiplz:ng
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:icon14pip14:
14pip14 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
:iconwhywouldyoudothatplz: nuuuu.... lukas dont die.
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:iconvalerienalley:
valerienalley Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
I hope he comes back to life. Somehow or someway i just hope.
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:iconcheshiere:
Cheshiere Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Thought so.... but still...Luuukaass TT-TT
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:iconchessykat01:
ChessyKat01 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
NNNNOOOOOO! DX
You almost had me crying there (I usually don't cry)
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:iconpikaninjachu:
Pikaninjachu Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
Thanks i didnt really need to keep down my dinner. I feel sick. Great story though
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Uh, you're welcome?
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:iconpikaninjachu:
Pikaninjachu Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
No dont take that as a bad thing. You just did a great job in the description category. So great that i could picture the night crawlers crawling into his- *shudder*. Still, amazing! Keep it up
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh. Thank you then.
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:iconmini-sanada:
mini-sanada Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student General Artist
my feels... MY FEELS!!! :iconwhywouldyoudothatplz: :iconrazycryplz:

anyway another great chapter as always. (lots of sleep and homework were nearly neglected because of this story) ;P
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The story isn't going away. Your studies and health should come before this. ^^;
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:iconmini-sanada:
mini-sanada Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student General Artist
I know but... Lukas! :iconcutecryplz: Haha, don't worry, I only did that because I only started reading this last night plus my homework isn't that hard/time-consuming. ^^
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Arti-Z Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconclapplz:
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Burning-Night Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
As always, a great chapter. I'm curious (but also anxious) about how the story continues from here on!
You're the queen of plot twists and cliffhangers, I'll give you that XD

But it makes everything more interesting and exciting! You're really good at writing emotions, I teared up a couple of times already! ^^'

I lay my heart in your hands, if you continue to shatter it, that's fine with me. Just keep this story as vivid and beautiful as it was since the beginning ;_;
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't think it's a good idea for me to be responsible for someone's heart literally or figuratively. ^^; I could very well end up destroying it.

On another note, thank you for the compliments.
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Burning-Night Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I guess so XD
What I was trying to say is, wether you decide on a happy ending or a tragic one, the story in itself is very enjoyable and captivating.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why, thank you again.
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