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Ah, the other night, I was the last one to take a shower (I take showers at night). The fire alarm went off, and as a result, I ran outside with meager clothes and wet hair. Screw the people laughing! What if there really was a fire?!

Safety before dignity, everyone! :icondeterminedplz:

Oh yeah, there are still some holes, but I stopped here because I haven't eaten dinner yet. :I

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.
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:iconkyoko-kimo:
Kyoko-Kimo Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GODAMMIT READER-CHAN! HOW DENSE ARE YOU!?
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:iconlayla-mindora:
layla-mindora Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooh now i get were the 'bearer of flames' comes from
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:iconravelium:
Ravelium Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014
Ahhh, I love it when writers put a good historical backgrounds on their storie.
And I've had to read the comments to make a connection with Lukas' name. I'm dense too~
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Eh heh heh. Thank you. :thanks:
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:iconimaftf:
IMAFTF Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist
I was like reader-chan. I guess I can be pretty dense when it comes to understanding some things. 
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LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. Divine Keeper of the Sapphire Flames... How the heck did I not make the connection sooner? Eh I sympathize with reader-chan here (I can be unbelievably dense at times)
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:iconk1ll3r-f0x:
K1LL3R-F0X Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
Its funny how i understood it, but the reader didn't XD
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:iconenbi-to-miruku:
Enbi-to-Miruku Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student General Artist
So tell me - did you plan to have this flames keeper tale in the first place, or did you create it based on Lukas' title?

But I love it anyway :heart:
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I had it from the beginning.
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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
Loved it ^w^
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:iconflyingmintbunny32:
Flyingmintbunny32 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student Artist
God i didn't know it was Lukas?! Actually I was confused till almost the end.....
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:iconjesslableh:
JesslaBleh Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
"I am so confused."
NO I'M NOT! IT'S HIM! IT'S HIM! SAPHIRE FLAMES! GAAAHHH! >.< lol, but I love this lots! :) You're a very talented writer!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you very much~
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:iconjesslableh:
JesslaBleh Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
Oh, it's nothing I should be thanked for! It's just the honest truth! :D
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:iconmusicgirl68:
musicgirl68 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
._. The story "I am so confused"

Took the words right out of my mouth xD
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:iconoh-my-maple:
Oh-My-Maple Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconiknowthatfeelplz:
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:iconarrisorra:
Arrisorra Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Aah… I love you, Lukas, and I know you think I'm stupid, and I can live with that…
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:icon14pip14:
14pip14 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
half way through the story telling i figured it out. but how are the flames passed to a human?(dirty thoughts)
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:iconfardreamr:
FarDreamr Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lololololololololololololololol
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Do not think dirty thoughts in this series. It isn't that kind of fan fiction.
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Shuru10 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW. The whole time I was having internal debates over whether it was Lukas, Emil, or neither of them. O__o :iconwonderingplz:

I can be so clueless some times. I had to get to the end to figure out who had the flame. -__-" :iconsweatdropplz:
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momo-shroom Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So, I'm a little confused as to how the sorcerer could communicate with the dragons? :? I thought only vessels and dragonhearts could do that...

(And I just have to add, reader-chan is denser than extra-firm tofu in this one.)

Wow, I really don't comment on this story enough... I've been following it since the very beginning, and I still look forward to seeing the new chapters in my inbox everyday and it's quickly climbing the ladder of my favorite fanfiction series that I've read so far. The concept is super unique and the plot is so interesting that it keeps you on the edge of your seat wondering what misfortunes will befall on the reader and the dragons next... Keep up the awesome work! :D
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The sorcerer is a sorcerer so he's magic. :)

Also, thank you very much for the compliments~ :aww:
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:iconcrazycharlette1415:
CrazyCharlette1415 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my. No wonder.

yes I am that slow
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:iconyamiyuki1:
yamiyuki1 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
omg good thing there wasn't a real fire~~! *hugs*
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dreamselfycreated Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Student General Artist
dat pic makes me want to slap the hell out of N and thats N i would slap btwLlama brigade Llama brigade 
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:iconyamiyuki1:
yamiyuki1 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Run N! I'll distract her! 
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:icondreamselfycreated:
dreamselfycreated Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Student General Artist
no need too *puts on a evil smile* *takes out a box full of fangirls* *and a shiny mew was playing with the box* FANGIRLS! THERE IS N THERE!!!
*opens box* 

N's pov :

argh! the champ is too hard!!!
must keep running!

haru (the samurai who's walking in the scene )
fangirl attacks they are famous....

my pov : my little mew.. what shall we do with the N? call Tino the finnish sniper? or fangirls?

mews : TINO TINO TINO I WANT TINO TINO TINO!!!!!!

DONE <:)
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:iconyamiyuki1:
yamiyuki1 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
me; *doesnt' even know*

N: *dies inside*
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:icondreamselfycreated:
dreamselfycreated Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Student General Artist
Haru : *pokes N with a twig*
haru : scoutland lets go home
*scoutland picks N up*
*ENTERING A NEW WORLD!*
*haru turns into Erin*
Erin : Emil what should we do to him?
??? : I don't know..
???? : crap he's awake
*hides under a crate*
*AUTHUR CHAN COMES IN*
what the bloody matter with you?
japan : N!!! N!!!! HOLLY FBJHSDRBFLJGHSRILFN SIGN MAH BUTT!!!!!!!!!
???? : WTF KIKU?

cat face Kitty Dance Nicolas Cage Kill me Now slap 
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NamiKazeQueen Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahahaha! Kasumi! Your so slow!

Kas: Shut up you!
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AnAwkwardBlue Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
I figured it out 5 minutes before I figured it out. :I dem fire alarms, one happened during my athletics period, fortunately around the end so we we're clothed decently :)
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, of course.
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Iris-the--kitty Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D Amazing!
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:iconleoyun:
Leoyun Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh gosh, reader should have looked at his title more closely...XD
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:iconaerilaya:
Aerilaya Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh jeez. I knew reader was slow, but not THAT slow. :iconsighingplz:
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0-EmoLeopard-0 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
bhdfvmzbxcnvm//dies//

...I just realised that most, if not all, of my comments on this series involve random keyboard language.

I CAN'T HELP IT IT'S SO AMAZING JHSDFGAJLSHABJDK
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's not good for the keyboard, and I mean that in a serious way. My brother would flip if I mistreated his keyboards.
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0-EmoLeopard-0 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really?
...Oops.
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Siren979647 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student General Artist
the last line

I love lukas so much
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:iconfyreflare:
Fyreflare Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Writer
As soon as he said passed on to other dragons, I was like, "Holy Roman Empire! So that's it!" And then Reader-chan remained oblivious and I was like, "Are you being legit? Sheesh, and I thought I was blonde."
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh. It's part of the gag. :XD:
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:iconfyreflare:
Fyreflare Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Writer
Very well done! :D
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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cheesecake125 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
I'm so slow with the obvious..."Divine Keeper of the Sapphire Flames"...WHY DIDN'T I GET THAT FASTER.

A very good story he told though.

So I know (I think) you're in California, but where you are is it warm? Because then at least you wouldn't be freezing your head off outside...I don't know. And yes, I suppose "Safety Before Dignity" still stands.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*Laughs* It's okay. :XD:

Yes, California is comparably warmer to some of the other states, but the school I go to has a wide open field. The wind was blowing nonstop. >.<
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:iconcheesecake125:
cheesecake125 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Ah, okay. Well, that sucks. Haha, when I think of California I either think of sunny LA or rainy SF...
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, come on, California has waaaaay more than just L.A. or S.F.!
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