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I don't why I forgot that Denmark bought a firework, not a firecracker. ^^;

I normally don't listen to music when I'm writing, but I decided to make an exception this time around.

Hong Kong speaks with a Gyaruo accent which is the same as a valley-girl accent in English. That's why he talks like Poland. It's canon. Don't point that out to me.

EDIT: Gosh dang it. Why didn't anyone tell me Denmark was saying they couldn't hold their breaths for very long? They can!

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KuroBaraHime357 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014
LET THE FORTH WALL KNOW YOUR BREAKING POWERS Author-sanBig Fool Emoji-13 (Cool) [V2]  
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Eh heh heh. ^^; 
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StarSapphire9601 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
seriously Reader-chan?!
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
Loved it XD
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YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
There goes the fourth wall. AGAIN!!
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Shuru10 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
THE FOURTH WALL HAS BEEN BROKEN YET AGAIN!! :icondignitylaughplz: XD

So wait, are both of them under water? O__o
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FFRules-girl14 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
Fourth wall? what the heck is the fourth wall? and why are there even second, first, and thirds? and yes i know that was out of order.
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preussensunflowers Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ikik someone's already answered you, but whatevs!

In acting and other stage performances, the "4th wall" is basically the boundary between the actors and the "house"(audience).
So like, if the stage actor(s) are interacting with the audience in any way or making out-of-character remarks, then they'd be "breaking" the 4th wall.

:)
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FFRules-girl14 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
Okay~!
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Shuru10 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm pretty sure it means when a character knows that someone else in the "outer world" is creating a story. :icono-oplz:

Like in this part, " “Maybe because it makes the plot more intense?” ". And when Lukas said, " “I’m the only one who can make outer plot references in this story!” ". :D

I'm not sure about the other ones though. :I
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FFRules-girl14 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
oh okay! Thank you!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep.
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cheesecake125 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
Wow, you're updating so fast and I almost can't keep up! It's great, though.

This was such an action packed chapter, and I loved it. And Lukas is right, everywhere I/reader/whoever goes, disaster occur. *sigh* Oh well.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Such is the unfortunate outcome of being the protagonist of a story. :XD:
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AkikoGurl Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
I don't quite remember which paragraph or line it was in, but you forgot an "e" in the word "adrenaline".
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I did. OTL Thank you for pointing that out.
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AkikoGurl Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
No problem c:

Also, in the next chapter I think you might've made a typo. I think you meant "jumped", but you put "just" at the part where Mathias was explaining his arm to the reader.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, no, that's correct. My syntax is just weird is all.
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bookaddicted Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
I don't know why, but I've literally just noticed that Yong Soo's in this now... and he's S.Korea
(//feels really stupid)
HAHAH NOW I SHALL MOVE ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER :iconmadlaughplz:
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, in the guide in Chapter 22, I mentioned that Yong Soo was South Korea.
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bookaddicted Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Ohh dear... scatterbrained also, apparently :iconmoriartyohnoesplz:
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CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor horses.... TT___TT
I'm happy that Mathias and Lukas are still alive though
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
excellent. fireworks.
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agatstone Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
That was pure epicness
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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HDawgLuvsAnime Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
That was intense! There were times in that chapter that I was worried Mathias would get caught, too. Thanks for the exciting chapter.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome. :)
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CrazyCharlette1415 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor fourth wall. It's been abused one too many times in this story.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's only been three times. It's a gag.
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Tygermane Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
YAY!! They got away!!! Oh happy day!!! Now they just have to get to Emil!!! So exciting!!! :D :iconexcitedicelandplz:
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Eugh. That plz is a little disturbing...
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Tygermane Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, yea :D
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palesile Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If this is a series I have not been following, I only stumbled upon this by reading stuff in my dA Watch from the group. You have great writing skills! The only thing I don't like about it is that you use "you" as if you're telling me how to feel and I don't have any say in it. I'd probably prefer if it was another point of view. Your point of view or even a 3rd person POV. Don't change what you've got if it's a series, leave it the way it is. That's just my preference. Again, you have nice talent :)
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for reading this. :aww:

This story is told in the 2nd-person point of view because it's a reader insert, or I definitely would have written it in the 3rd person otherwise. The formatting is done as such to suggest what the reader is supposed to feel. I don't know; that's how it's usually done.
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palesile Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't worry! I'm quite sure you're perfectly right hahah. I'm not all too familiar with fanfiction in and of itself, plus not liking second person is just a personal preference. Your work is still very good :)
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why, thank you again~
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Xsign-of-fireX Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OH MY GOSH. . . I love it. Plotbunnies are breeding today.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh. Thanks. :)
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Aerilaya Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:XD:

Yay! You're updating more! And the fourth wall is pretty much violated beyond help now! :dummy:
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Kagekittywolf Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Why are you so amazing with updates? You put my work to shame! (I can't say I don't enjoy this though ^^)
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Because if I don't update, I don't eat. TwT
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SweetAppleVinegar Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Whoa, so much action in that chapter *o* I re-read it a couple times just to get it all in; hahaha, those merchants won't be able to catch up with the reader and the dragons for now (hopefully)! Also, I can just imagine Lukas and Mathias kind of awkwardly holding their breaths in the freezing cold waters, like, "Has she found us yet? We've been holding our breaths for 15 minutes now @_@"

(and poor fourth wall... it's been violated quite a few times now in this series XD)
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, the 4th wall references come out whenever they do. :XD:
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LyriCrystal Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Beautiful 4th wall breaking... Simply splendid. Go Mathias!!!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh. Thanks.
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HetaliaOWC Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I screamed when I saw the up date XD
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blueava234 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Dun dun duuuuuuuunnnnn~! XD
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KokoroJiyu72 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! THESE CLIFFHANGERS ARE KILLING ME!! WHY MUST EVERYTHING BE SHROUDED IN MYSTERY!! *head desk*
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Fyreflare Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Writer
This is so awesome! I love how quickly you can update these chapters! Really impressive! :D
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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