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It actually took some drafting and whatnot. For a while I was debating on whether or not I wanted the Asians to be allies or enemies. As much as I love them, Vietnam and Thailand won't be in this story because they don't fit.

Holy, shoot, I'm as hungry as heck. Now I can eat dinner. :dummy:

Cheng: Macau
Yong Soo: South Korea
Leon: Hong Kong (I'm using his English name because I've never heard the name, "Kaoru," ever used in Cantonese or Mandarin)

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.
This story and picture belong to me, *GydroZMaa.

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:icongloriousblue15:
GloriousBlue15 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I have finished this story to my old account
now I know who's Cheng  is //I don't really read the description//
MACAU YOU KNOW I LOVE YOU HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!

Llama Emoji-56 (Hiding) [V3]
Llama Emoji-66 (Angry) [V3] you don't deserve a cookie CHENG
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:iconthat1asianchick:
That1AsianChick Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not going to lie. Sometimes I really hate my family. ^^
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Huh?
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:iconthat1asianchick:
That1AsianChick Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
If you look in my signature, it says that I'm Fem!China. I comment half in character and half as myself. The previous comment was me saying it from Fem!China's pov. I'm weird.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Eh, okay then.
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:iconthat1asianchick:
That1AsianChick Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry. I'll just stop commenting, except for the Dragonheart review.
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:iconawsomeve123:
Awsomeve123 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Emil... If you die I will revive you and then strangle you to death.
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:iconstarsapphire9601:
StarSapphire9601 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
don't you fucking die on me Emil...or else I'll kill you <----wut?
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:iconpokepal5:
Pokepal5 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Emil... dont die.... Don't die my almost friend! DON'T DIEEEE D:
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:iconprussianmaple27:
PrussianMaple27 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh no I am literally crying... please don't be dead Emil...
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:iconenbi-to-miruku:
Enbi-to-Miruku Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student General Artist
You are an admirable author. Your story is so inspiring and it shows how good the quality of a fan fiction can get.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my. Thank you very much~ :iconembarrasedplz:
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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
:nuu: don't hurt Emil
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:iconvalerienalley:
valerienalley Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
Please tell me Emil isn't dead......
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If I told you, where would the excitement be in that?
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:iconvalerienalley:
valerienalley Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
Well there wouldn't be any excitement, but Iam really eager to find out what happen. it is such a good story.
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:icon14pip14:
14pip14 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
when the connection to emil was lost i thought i was feeling like the reader with despair but it turns out i was hungry then i cried. for not having food in my stomach and for emil, lukas, reader-chan, and mathias. in that order
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I would imagine that if you cried for a lack of food, it would greatly hinder your physiological responses to search for food.
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IoaleKelina Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually, Leon is Hong Kong's English name whereas either Wang Jia Long (王家龙) or Li Xiao Chun (李晓淳) is his Chinese name, pronounced as Wong Ka Long and Lei Xiu Chun for Cantonese. Jia Long is more commonly used, I hope that helps ^-^
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No, I mean his name of English origin. ^^; He has a lot of fanmade Cantonese names.
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:iconioalekelina:
IoaleKelina Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Jia Long and Xiao Chun are names thought by Himaruya himself.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I get that, but I was talking about using an English name, not a Cantonese one.
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:iconangelathewriter:
AngelaTheWriter Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
DO YOU KNOW HOW MANY TIMES I SAID NO?! LIKE A BILLION TIMES! EMIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SDFKLAASFDFLKFKLKLMKLSDFKLSDFKLSDKLSFFK
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:iconlyricrystal:
LyriCrystal Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
I think...this made me cry. This is the first time a story ever made me cry... :crying:
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry about that...
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:iconleoyun:
Leoyun Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh crap. my country is a bad character 0_0
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AnAwkwardBlue Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
D': Emiiiiiilllll!!!! You're playing my heart like a harp! Poor Lukas, being baggage, (but hopefully it will teach him humility) and, I can understand the Mei, putting family first, so I can't really HATE the caravan, just strongly disagree with them. Very well written!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, it's okay. The quirkiness of this story will play with them a little more. :thanks:
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SweetAppleVinegar Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
God, this chapter was pure emotional torture ;_; First, Lukas is captured and will be sold off and now Emil might be dead or something equally horrible (I'm gonna cry man)!!! Then Mei and the whole theme of family coming first... It's very relatable, especially so in the asian community; family will always come first and you always do your best for yourself and for the family; you did a fantastic job (even though you left us with a cliffhanger XDDD)!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, Asians have a rather communative way of thinking. The next chapter should be out in a bit...
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:iconsweetapplevinegar:
SweetAppleVinegar Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Yes we most certainly do XD But really, I don't think anyone truly would mind if you took your time getting out the next chapter ;)
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:icontygermane:
Tygermane Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Holy crap! I don't want to wait or the next chapter! I wanna know what happens! These cliffhangers are pure torcher!
Another great chapter though!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry. The cliffhangers just happen like that.
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:icontygermane:
Tygermane Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know, but I think that's part of the fun of writing too lol
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, it's quite amusing to see everyone so on edge.
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:icontygermane:
Tygermane Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, I bet!
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Zookie7331 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013   Digital Artist
EEEEEEMIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL ;A;
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:iconagatstone:
agatstone Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Oh no it's even worse now.
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:iconfranny-ramos:
franny-ramos Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconohgodwhyplz:
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:iconfranny-ramos:
franny-ramos Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student General Artist
I put all the story in my ebook, and I finished in one day, wen I was to see how much pages it was... it was 230 pages ._." holygodthatidontknowthatexist... I love this story! :iconfrenchsquealplz:
but now...:iconfrancecryplz: IM crying!!! :iconepiccryplz: :iconcryingplz: :iconcry-plz: EMIL COME BACK! :iconcomebackplz: Ill save yoy emil! :iconrunplz: :iconchibiicelandplz:
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow. Thank you so much for reading so far in such a short amount of time. :aww:
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MRXLB Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Ommygowd xD T__T This is such an amazing story, it's the first time I've ever got tears in my eyes from a story before TTxTT
I love this story <3
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you. Gee, if this makes you teary, then I wonder how you'd do with my Germany series. I even got a little emotional writing it.
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cuppiecakiee Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! D:
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I haven't commented in awhile because I'm always busy, but...I seriously love this. The plot twists, the way you're building this world, the way the relationships between the characters ebb and flow...this deserves more credit than it does get as it is. If this wasn't a fanfiction, I would buy this novel in a heart beat. You have the perfect blend of drama, humor, and slowly budding affections. I just...I want to hug this story.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not worthy of such praise from someone like you. >.< Thank you so much, nonetheless. Gah, my chest...
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AurealisHiruya Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Thanks for updating so Soon again^^
This story is really fascinating^^
(And it's funny, but I'm reading two books right now. One with the name Wolfsherz which means Wolfheart And another one called Drachenelfen, meaning Dragonelves XD)
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome. Ah, what a coincidence.
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Jet21x Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Noooo! Emil....Lukas....im loosing everyone </3
Anyhow, another great chapter, it really does just keep getting more interesting every chapter, i love it! :D
and of course the suspense is now building! Cant wait for the next one ^^
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