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Realized that I've been getting lazy and bored so I decided to get off my butt for once and deck out a chapter. New characters have been introduced. I've actually been planning for them to join the trip for quite some time now.

Yao: China
Mei: Taiwan
Kiku: Japan

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.
This story and picture belong to me, *GydroZMaa.

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:iconkyoko-kimo:
Kyoko-Kimo Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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GODAMMIT CHINA!
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:iconlayla-mindora:
layla-mindora Featured By Owner Edited Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Okee, i'm getting creeped out now by yao
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:iconlozgamer316:
LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I had a feeling Yao was the caravan dude 'cause it said it was from the east. The firecrackers and the dumplings confirmed it
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Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
How did I know the businessman was China all along, and the others were the Asian group?
(I'm just that scary good.)
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
There aren't too many people the businessman could have been. 
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Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
I know but it wasn't till the chapter when Lukas stole the dumplings did it fully come into view and not be a showdy-gray-cloud-figer-person, in the form of Yao Wang.
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:iconthat1asianchick:
That1AsianChick Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually I'm not sorry for eating the dumplings.
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:iconxxcandy-loverxx:
XxCandy-LoverxX Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*le gasp* you're asian? (Well, according to your username) cuz I am too!
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:iconthat1asianchick:
That1AsianChick Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool! :)
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:iconxxcandy-loverxx:
XxCandy-LoverxX Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Hehe... XD
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:iconice-the-dragon:
ice-the-dragon Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014

yao:your a dragon aren't you!


my reaction: &*%& you! yao! *le thoughts: what if finds out im a dragonheart $%$$*


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:iconstarsapphire9601:
StarSapphire9601 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
first I was like: so it was China all the long??
the last part: fuck you China!
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:iconnemurenainda:
Nemurenainda Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Student General Artist
OH WOW!! YAO'S BEING A BADASS!! :omfg:

Hehe! I love it! :heart:
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:iconmistdream454:
MistDream454 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
I didn't figure it out it was the Asains until he introduced himself!!! XD Gosh i'm slow :3
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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
Loved it OwO
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:iconkitty-chan3215:
Kitty-chan3215 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
It was the Asains xD My own OC is part of the Asains, North Korea x3
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Um...that's nice...
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Arti-Z Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The asians....XD lol kinda guessed it was them at the fire craker scene cause it reminded me of hong kong but hey I was right :3 cant wait to read the other chapters I need to catch up on ^^
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SweetAppleVinegar Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
....... I totally knew it was China all along ever since his firecrackers in the Bone Forest :iconhideplz: I just didn't expect for him to capture Lukas just to sell him off :O! Oh my gosh, typical Chinese business-man XD I'm pretty happy you included Macau (not too many know of his actual existence O.o) and Taiwan is cute as always ^u^. For the first time in this series... I'm actually concerned about Lukas the Troll Dragon's safety @_@ ! Good work on this chapter!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh dear. Did you read this chapter after 22?

But, yeah, I've featured Macau and Taiwan in my Hong Kong series so I wouldn't think of leaving them out so easily.
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SweetAppleVinegar Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Eh, I read this really early in the morning today, forgot to comment, then read chapter 22 and commented on it before realizing I forgot to comment on this one @_@ Whoops....
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HDawgLuvsAnime Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Fireworks and dumplings... :iconfacedeskforeverplz: HOW DID I NOT MAKE THE CONNECTION EARLIER?!?! I can be so stupid, sometimes...
I'm pretty concerned about what Yao and his group have planned for Lukas. The suspense is killing me. On to the next chapter!!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I didn't expect everyone to get it, so it's fine if you didn't make the connection.
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Kagekittywolf Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I was just checking my dA updates on my iPod, as per usual when I realized I hadn't commented on this chapter. So, I just clicked on the first chapter I saw and was about to comment when BAM. I saw that it was actually 22! I almost cried tears of joy!
Thank you for updating! It makes me days ;A;
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, you're very welcome~ :aww:
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Shuru10 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*GASP* Yao knows!! :O :iconshockplz: :iconyaychinaplz:

Now lets just hope he won't do some thing to Lukas. :iconscaredplz:
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0-EmoLeopard-0 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
//dies//
IT'S OUT OMIGOD THE NEXT ONE'S OUT SJKLGHSJKLGJKLSGFJKLS

I love it!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my. Thank you. :aww:
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0-EmoLeopard-0 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aaaabsolutely no problem~
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kay-kandy Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So their are two things that can be a possible out come 1. Some of them are dragons and remembered Lukas (The divine keeper of the sapphire flames) 2. They are dragon hunters or something along the lines of that.
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Asuye Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013   Writer
I never thought we'd see these buisnessmen again! Heh.

Did you get rid of Yao's 'aru', though? Just curious.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I didn't get rid it, I just didn't add it. I'm half Chinese, and I've never heard a Chinese person say "aru." It's a Japanese stereotype.
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Asuye Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013   Writer
Mm. It makes it seem more serious. After reading a lot of Reader Inserts, I got used to reading an 'aru' after most of his sentences. However, I honestly highly doubt any Chinese person would even say that. But it was in his personality, so that's why I said 'rid'.
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cheesecake125 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Yes, it's the Asians!

Oh, but the ending really took me by surprise...so now I can't figure out if the Asians are good or bad (or in the middle?) We'll see. This was a great chapter. And of course Norway would come up with that kind of a story...
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, he would. :XD:

Thank you for the compliment as always.
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mossheart12nya Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
:iconletmehugyouplz: :iconspazzplz: that just about somes up my feels
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my...
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:icontracy26:
Tracy26 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
:O How did I not see this coming? The fireworks should've given away the caravan's identity right away! Shame on me :P
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:iconvulturevain:
VultureVain Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
That cliffhanger -3-

But so far the story is really good I can't wait for the next one
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Burning-Night Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My first guess was actually Turkey being the merchant! I imagined the whole caravan to look more Oriental themed rather than Asian. (however, as soon as it got to the fireworks in one of the previous chapters, it was pretty obvious to me ;) )

Oh Gosh, I sure wonder what they're gonna do now that Lukas is officially revealed! .3.
Looking forward to the next chapter! :D
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ponygurl433 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
CHINA! The asian nations! Yay!

But now Lukas has been revealed.... ITS HIS OWN DAMN FAULT FOR PRETENDING TO BE A PRINCE.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No, there were other signs in the past. ^^;
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zombieslayer284 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
I KNEW IT WAS CHINA!!!!!! But now I'm worried...about Norge
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geekishlynerdy Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahah! I knew it! I was getting an inkling as to who the...caravan people were when they killed the netiss and when Mathias pointed out that their caravan was red and looked like it came from the east. This chapter (and the last) gave me my confirmation!! :D: I hope Vietnam, Thailand, and India make an appearance in this story

Heh, Yao is getting on to something right here, and I'm starting to wonder if... ...

Is Eliatha a region or the continent that encompasses the East as well?
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I threw in a few subtle hints here and there. I'm actually not going to be including those character because they don't work geographically, and I don't want to overwhelm everyone with too many characters.

Eliatha is Eliatha.
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geekishlynerdy Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I see, makes sense.

What is that supposed to mean!?!?
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoops. I meant "That."
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's it's Eliatha.
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AurealisHiruya Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
It all makes sense now! XD

(The notes)

It's awesome that the New chapter is Out now^^

Keep up the Good work^^
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I'll try to! :aww:
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