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I thought it would be more fun to let the readers guess which line of dialogue belongs to who. :)

This chapter is similar to a jump in conversations I used in Ch 12 of Sky's Limit but with a different style. I figured since this is the twelfth chapter, I'd do something short and different for this story, too.

Here's a guide to whose saying which lines: [link]

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.
This story and picture belong to me, *GydroZMaa.

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:iconkyoko-kimo:
Kyoko-Kimo Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wait. What.














(Hilarious!) XD
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:iconhadaka-mitaku:
Hadaka-Mitaku Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When I was reading the first part I was like "um.....am I in the wrong chapter?" And then I suddenly realize Lukas' wing and mentally slap my forehead....
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:iconartemus2302:
Artemus2302 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014
GG mate. Made me snigger like an idiot.
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
GG? Okay?
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:iconartemus2302:
Artemus2302 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014
"Good Game" = GG
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Y-Yeah. I wouldn't know how it would fit in this context. ^^;
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:iconimapop13:
imapop13 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014
Hehehe..... You sneaky.... I already knew what you were doing at the beigning! Thank you for the Short and Sweet....
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IMAFTF Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist
At first I was like: Whaaaaat da!bunneh icon16 
And then I realised they were sewing a quarter way through~
You got me there.Big Fool Emoji-07 (Cry) [V2] 
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:iconlozgamer316:
LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ermahgersh I knew they were just repairing Lukas's wing but I had a WTF face on for at least half of the chappie
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TheTruthfulLiar445 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
Haha!!! xD that conversation DID sound very inappropriate but it was so funny!! 
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:iconmermaidgirl548:
Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
"You know, the more I think about it, that conversation we just had must have sounded very inapproriate."
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Oh you have no idea.
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OhsoDutch34 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
((That was hilarious! I just about died laughing! Along with some thoughts... :D ))
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:icongeekgurl234:
GeekGurl234 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014
That last line tho....

:harpdarp:  You don't say?
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:iconstrikerstar01:
Strikerstar01 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
At first I was like "Why would you want a third person in there while doing 'that'" then i realized they were fixing Lukas' wing like after the four line and was like "oh"
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:iconskyrimwolf11:
skyrimwolf11 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
at first i was like what? then i got it after a few lines, lol
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:iconthemirage-prismatic:
theMirage-Prismatic Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I KNEW they weren't taking about inappropriate things but I couldn't figure out exactly what they were referring to at first... then I went back and read it with the correct context. \o/
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HetaliaPuppet Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Omg, I laughed through it all, because I knew they were sewing. But it was soooooo hilarious! I could barely breathe, haha!
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:iconrheddkid:
rheddkid Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
Haha. Am I the only one who immediately thought of the thread and the needle upon reading the first line about it being out of the hole? xD
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:iconxxcandy-loverxx:
XxCandy-LoverxX Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Me too XD
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:iconrheddkid:
rheddkid Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
:iconthumbsupplz:
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:iconxxcandy-loverxx:
XxCandy-LoverxX Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:icontrollface:
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:icondinorex33:
dinorex33 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So I'm not alone! :iconyay2penglandplz:
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:iconrheddkid:
rheddkid Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
HAH! :iconhifiveplz:
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:icondinorex33:
dinorex33 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconepichighfiveplz:
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gammel-sjel Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OH MY GOSH! XDDDDDD THE BEGINNING! PARDON ME BUT AT TIMES I HAVE A PERVY MIND //shotshotshotshot But dear goodness gracious! XD This was hilarious! I had no~ clue as to what exactly~ was going on until the end! :iconlmfao-plz:
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:iconstarsapphire9601:
StarSapphire9601 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
oh mygod, oh my god, oh my god, Lukas...you're totally, like, right. You should have seen me laughing like a perv
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:iconsamikira:
samikira Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist
omg that was amazing! I couldn't help but laugh the whole time  XD
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:iconwolf4032:
wolf4032 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
I'm constantly have my WTF face on for the whole beginning and then "oh their just stitching the wound"
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:iconlizzels199:
Lizzels199 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Student General Artist
OMG
Out of text that sounds...
YOU DID THAT ON PURPOSE!! XD
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:iconskittlesxnom:
skittlesxnom Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconmegablushplz: oh gods that beginning 
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:iconiceycakes123:
IceyCakes123 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh wow this is the most fillered story episode ever, but it was awesome I love it xD
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*Laughs* "Story episode." :XD: I'm glad you liked it, though. 
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:iconiceycakes123:
IceyCakes123 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I'm so confused I don't know what to call it *sulks in shame* xD
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a chapter. 
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:iconaphbrussels:
APHBrussels Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I totaly agree on that last line ^^
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:iconandreaissy:
andreaissy Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
Lukas: “You know, the more I think about it, that conversation we just had must have sounded very inappropriate.”
Me: You dont say..........
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bluteddybear23 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Writer
Beginning of the chapter: :iconthisisawesomeplz: w-what?!
Ending of the chapter: huh..I  guess the conversation did sound wrong :iconenglandderpplz:
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:iconrubinight:
RubiNight Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
WAHHH!
When i read this, my Mom came in the room, took a look on my Laptop, patted me on my shoulder and leave the room!
*rofl*
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my...
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:iconrubinight:
RubiNight Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
i think it was funny xD 
She understand fun... and now she want to read it too^^ too bad that their English is worse than mine ^^
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, I see. I suppose I wouldn't mind the older audience. 
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RubiNight Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
She has no account, but she like it^^ 

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TsumesWolf Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Student General Artist
The whole time I was reading my mind filled with soo many dirty thoughts that I had to stop several times to laugh and curse at my self~
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:iconheartartemishunter:
HeartArtemisHunter Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMGMINDRAPE!!! *fistpump* sweet!
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ScarletC Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Student General Artist
AHHH GOD DO YOU KNOW WHAT I WAS IMAGINING! GAWW *Shivers* my minds been raped...I feel all exposed and wrong...T_T
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EllrMeepster Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
“You know, the more I think about it, that conversation we just had must have sounded very inappropriate.” Me: YOU THINK? XD
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SweetDiamondStudio Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist
I figured out that it was the wing about halfway through it because I knew that it wouldn't be one of those and it's chapter 12 of what like 45 and because I'm awesomer than prussia
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Obviously. I would have put a mature filter otherwise. 
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SweetDiamondStudio Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist
Yeah that too
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:iconawsomeve123:
Awsomeve123 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
... You had fun with this didn't you...
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