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My suitemates finally cleaned the restroom so I'm happy. :)

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.
Scotland is based on a pixiv design that belongs to Repoko.

Any similarities to characters, settings, scripts, or stories from other pieces of literature or media are purely coincidental.

This story belongs to me, *GydroZMaa.

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Katarenna Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol "what a mess"
:iconkatarenna: No $hit Sherlock.-_-
Lol I am loving this!!
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XlKittiezlX Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
Great chapter like always :D
WTF ALLISTOR WHY YOU HIDE YOURE FEELINGS :iconamgplz:
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
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likealoch Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Wow, a really great story so far.
You're not just scratching the surface, you are going deep - and the concept has so much sense and is creative! Damn, I love it.

You're a great writer and I would give you a real feedback, but I'm not a native speaker, so it's a bit hard. Sorry. ):
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, that's perfectly fine. I appreciate the compliments. :aww:
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Kagekittywolf Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
*discreetly favs your stories to show my love*
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's technically not discreet since I get feedback messages, but I still appreciate the gesture. :aww:
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KairiStar728 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
Holy Roman Empire! I've got to stop laughing when I read your works! I just got yelled at for laughing! Haha! I love this!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gah, I'm sorry you were yelled at. 'OTL
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KairiStar728 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
It's okay. It's my fault for being like the Awesome trio. I laugh loudly and I'm hyper! X{D Not your fault. I just love a good laugh!
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:iconhetaliarocksmysoxoff:
WANT MORE!!!! As always, this was extremely well written. I love how you describe all of the character and really bring out their personalities :) Keep up the excelent work!!!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much! :aww:
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Jet21x Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A sweet chapter, and nicely written as always :D
Allistor <3
looking forward to reading the next chapter ^^
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why, thank you~
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minchen0897 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
i laughed so hard at the last sentence!
Great chapter!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
Awww, finally, they're getting somewhere. I'm worried about Matthias though...
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agatstone Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
Great and somewhat cute.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
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RedDeathHots Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh heh, Allistor's such a dummy~ But I can actually see him as the awkward distant type, just by looking at his design you can tell he isn't as readable as Arthur. I like the thought of him being caring on the inside, yet complex and sort of cold/distant on the outside. And because he isn't exactly canon (yet) it's easy to mold his personality into any way you want.
I can't wait to see how the relationship between Reader and Allistor develops~ It's going to be cute, I can tell!
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
England's just a cynical b*stard. If you've read the comics on him, he's really not a likable character so he's easy to portray. As you pointed out, though, Scotland is harder to grasp as a character because he's not even canon. I could have easily made him the bad guy in this story (like I did in a certain other one), but I wanted to try out the challenge of doing role reversals. It's really fun. :aww:
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SirenaClaws Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Epic xD
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :)
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Aerilaya Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like this. :)
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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darksniper101 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Student Writer
Awwwwww sweet moment.....can't wait for the next part
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MidoriBani Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Student Writer
“I anything happens, I’ll take full responsibility, Allistor.”
I'm assuming it was supposed to be, “If anything happens, I’ll take full responsibility, Allistor," ?
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, you're right. Thanks for telling me. ^^;
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MidoriBani Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome, love <3
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214-Hollow-Heart-16 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so awesome! I have been reading this since the beginning and i cant wait for the next part! You are an amazing writer:) keep up the good work, i love how realistic and insiteful(forgive the incorrect spelling) this is!

P.S the admission from Allistor was a surprise( a nice one too:))
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you~
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Muzukashiko Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Student
Allistor! Cute~ hahah like it lots~
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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