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Well, this was taken down because it used to be a lemon so I edited some of it so it wouldn't violate any policies.

At least my lemons had plots so all I had to do was cut out the XXX. It's not the same, though. Feels slightly cliché.

If you'd like to read the lemon version of this story, you can note me your email. 

*Terrible description of a moment. It might not make sense unless you take physics or statics, but if not, chances are, you'll never hear about the term in your life.

Axis Powers: Hetalia and its characters belong to Himaruya Hidekazu.

Any similarities to characters, settings, scripts, or stories from other pieces of literature or media are purely coincidental.

This story belongs to me, GydroZMaa.
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FeartheHedgehog101 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I FEEL SO FLUFFY RIGHT NOW!!!~ i know the story wasnt really fluffy but i still feel fluffy!~ and you'll be expecting an email soon!~ ;)
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shigurefan101 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
Ahhhhh soooo cute!!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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:iconvictorialovesyoubros:
With your picture, and your reply. I had imagined you twirling around, while yelling 'thank you'
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Laughs* I can imagine so. 
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ToshiroLuver1 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
Would you send me the lemon version? I lOved the story! 
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:iconkalablue:
Kalablue Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
If it's not too much to ask, could you send me the lemon?
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You need to note me your email.
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:iconmasi15:
Masi15 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Could it be too much If I also ask for the lemons verison?? I dont wanna be demanding or anything...
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You need to note me your email address so I can send it to you. 
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TobixChanxSempai Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I really love your story! :D But one question, why did they take down the lemon version of this? I mean, I've seen other lemons too....
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~

Some bitter person was attacking contest participants of a lemon contest. That person lost and started reporting the lemons of the winners, one of whom was me, and then started reporting the lemons of popular writers out of spite and to hide his/her trails. It was over a year ago, but that situation really bothered me and a lot of other people. Newer writers are unaware of this, but the lemons they write can't really compare to the ones that were deleted. 
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TobixChanxSempai Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Awww Thats too bad. The person was lost indeed, so unfair. Hope dont experience anymore of this, its just stupid. Thats really too bad though......Also if you dont mind? Do you still have the lemon version, if not....sirry for asking XD Lol But really hope nothing like that happens again.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
If you want the lemon version, you'll have to note me your email address. dA prohibits the usage of mature content through notes.
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TobixChanxSempai Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Ok I will.
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AnaisseSteighart Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, so beautiful. I love it! Good job! :D I have no words to express how much I love this!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much~
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:iconhonglee:
HongLee Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist

Can I get the lemon version as well, please?

Or you don't send it to anyone anymore?

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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You need to note me your e-mail address. Any explicit content sent through notes isn't allowed on dA. 
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:iconhonglee:
HongLee Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Done!
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sayaikari Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
could you send me the lemon?
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You need to note me your e-mail address. Mature content through notes is also forbidden on dA.
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penn-smosher Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Could I note you my email for the lemon also? 
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, that's fine. :)
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HimekoAyuzawa Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Seesaw.... hold on im gonna go find one and play on it for a while.....
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vienna-kangaroo Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This was just beautiful. It wasn't cliche like most that follow this sort of plot, and to be honest, I was surprised when I read in the description that it was even a lemon to begin with. ^^' Anyway, lovely work. It really did sort of reaffirm for me why it is that I admire you - your writing is simply so addictive, and draws the reader in so wonderfully.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why, thank you~ :iconembarrasedplz:

Yeah, I suppose I should be grateful that I actually put some plot into this story otherwise it might not have worked. ^^; I think the story turned out okay, either way.
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vienna-kangaroo Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome. <3

Yes, indeed. That's the thing I chiefly noticed - the lemon was actually originally part of the plot, but not the sole thing, so that when you took it out you still had a wonderful piece of writing. That's an unusual thing. Most lemons I happen to come across are repetitive and are basically the entire story. ^^;

I honestly think I would like it better, anyway, without the lemon. ^^
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, again. I'm glad you did. :aww:
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vienna-kangaroo Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome. It was a pleasure reading it. ^^
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3771 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013
Aw, the ending was cute~!
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Muzukashiko Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student
Oh this was sweet~ I love the positive side of Den he is a real sweetheart. Hehe this was cute and fun~ I'd love to see a sketch of thisXD good work~ hehe
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't imagine any of this being a sketch for some reason.
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:iconmuzukashiko:
Muzukashiko Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student
Then I shall show you my vision! Wuahahahahahah~ whenever I get time that is... :)
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooh, I eagerly await it. :aww:
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:icongoddessofinvestment:
GoddessofInvestment Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Hetalia characters are just making my expectations for guys a lot higher...
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, they all have their downsides, too. Some of them are pretty extreme.
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:icongoddessofinvestment:
GoddessofInvestment Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Kiku's personal space issues and Lovi's grumpiness makes them more cute!
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Spain's drunken rampages and Russia's mental instability aren't exactly turn-ons, either. If you spent the rest of your life with someone like a real Romano, it would be probably close to dealing with daily verbal and maybe even domestic abuse.
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kalliat Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, not true! While Romano behaves like that towards men, in his official bio Himaruya said he is a huge flirt towards women, and treats them well. c:
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, to good-looking women--I'm not saying anyone here looks subpar, I'm just not very confident with my own appearance...
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GoddessofInvestment Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Just keep pain away from alcohol, and give Russia more than enough love and problem solved! I think...
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Trust me, you're better off setting expectations for a partner who will simply love you for who you are and treat you right. In the end, good looks and amusing qualities like eating tomatoes and "sexy" accents can only last so long. That's how my parents have stayed so happy all of this time, and their relationship is where all of my sweeter romantic relationships in my stories come from.
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vmisty1414 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG I almost cried tears of happiness! X,D
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, uh...that's a good thing, right?
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:iconmiggytalia:
miggytalia Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
I Luv it :'3 why cant I really have him T-T?
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:icongydrozmaa:
GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Because he's not real?
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miggytalia Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Yea :( sad day
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
It's so cute. ^^ I love it.
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GydroZMaa Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why, thank you~
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